Money— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như "umm" và nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn. Bạn cũng nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về cảm xúc hoặc kết quả của việc vay tiền.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have borrowed money from my friends once. It happened when I forgot to bring money for breakfast at school, so I had to ask my friends to lend me some. Fortunately, they were very kind and helped me out, which made me feel grateful.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh câu dài và lặp từ. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về tình huống hoặc cảm xúc khi cho mượn tiền sẽ giúp câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have lent money to my friends before. For example, when we often go to the school canteen for breakfast, sometimes my friends forget their money, so I lend them some. I don't mind helping them because we trust each other.

× I still remember it. Umm, it's a time when I went to breakfast and I realized that umm, I forgot to bring money so I have to borrow it from my friends to buy the breakfast.

✓ I still remember it. Umm, it was a time when I went to have breakfast and I realized that umm, I had forgotten to bring money so I had to borrow it from my friends to buy the breakfast.

The phrase 'went to breakfast' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'went to have breakfast' because 'breakfast' is a meal, not a place. Also, 'have to borrow' should be in past tense 'had to borrow' to match the past context. 'Forgot' is correct past tense, but 'have to borrow' is present tense and inconsistent with the past narrative.

× Yes, when it all happened at the same situations when you know I and my friends often go to the canteen in the school to eat breakfast and this time my friends forgot to bring money to so I lent money for.

✓ Yes, it all happened in the same situation when, you know, my friends and I often go to the school canteen to eat breakfast, and this time my friends forgot to bring money, so I lent them some money.

The phrase 'at the same situations' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in the same situation' because 'situation' is singular and 'in' is the proper preposition. 'I and my friends' should be 'my friends and I' for correct pronoun order. 'Forgot to bring money to' is incorrect; 'to' is unnecessary. 'Lent money for' is incomplete; it should be 'lent them some money' to specify the indirect object.