Money— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear expressions, such as 'bought some amount of money' and 'ask friend who'. To improve, use correct verbs like 'borrowed' and clarify your sentences. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, 'Yes, I have borrowed money from a friend during an emergency related to my sister's health. In December 2025, she had a severe headache, and I didn't have enough money to pay her medical bills, so I asked a friend for help.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I have borrowed money from a friend during an emergency related to my sister's health. In December 2025, she had a severe headache, and I didn't have enough money to pay her medical bills, so I asked a friend for help.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'have given a lot of money' and 'who was in emergency about his medical condition'. To improve, use clearer sentence structures and linking words to organize your ideas. For example, you can say, 'Yes, I have lent money to several friends. Recently, I lent 10,000 to my closest friend who was facing a medical emergency. I try to help my friends whenever they need financial support.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I have lent money to several friends. Recently, I lent 10,000 to my closest friend who was facing a medical emergency. I try to help my friends whenever they need financial support.

× Well, yeah, I have bought some amount of money when there was an emergency which which was related to my sister's health.

✓ Well, yeah, I borrowed some money when there was an emergency which was related to my sister's health.

The verb 'have bought' is incorrect here because 'buy' means to purchase goods or services, not to borrow money. The correct past tense verb to use is 'borrowed' to indicate taking money temporarily. Also, 'have bought' is present perfect, but the context requires simple past to specify a past event.

× It was in the 2025 December.

✓ It was in December 2025.

The phrase 'the 2025 December' is incorrect word order and article usage. The correct form is 'December 2025' without 'the'. Also, '2025' is a future year, but since the student is referring to a past event, the year should be consistent with the past tense or clarified.

× She was suffering from a headache and I do not have a lot of money to pay her bills.

✓ She was suffering from a headache and I did not have a lot of money to pay her bills.

The sentence mixes past tense ('was suffering') with present tense ('do not have'). To maintain tense consistency, 'do not have' should be changed to past tense 'did not have'.

× So I ask friend who.

✓ So I asked a friend for help.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks proper structure. It misses an article before 'friend' and a preposition to indicate the action. The corrected sentence completes the thought clearly.

× Yeah, I have given a lot of money to different friends recently have given 10,000 to my dearest friend who was in emergency about his medical condition.

✓ Yeah, I have given a lot of money to different friends recently. I gave 10,000 to my dearest friend who was in an emergency because of his medical condition.

The original sentence is a run-on and mixes present perfect ('have given') with simple past ('was'). Also, 'in emergency' needs an article 'an'. Splitting into two sentences improves clarity and tense consistency.

× So I provide him similarly how I have provided a lot of them to other who needs me.

✓ So I provided him help similarly to how I have provided help to others who needed me.

The verb 'provide' should be in past tense 'provided' to match the past context. Also, 'other who needs me' is incorrect; it should be 'others who needed me' for plural and past tense agreement.