Money— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯的连接词。建议加强语法练习，使用更自然的表达方式，并且补充具体细节使回答更丰富。

Ejemplo: No, I usually avoid borrowing money from others because it can cause misunderstandings and pressure. For example, some people borrow money to buy expensive items, but I prefer to save up and buy things myself.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，句子不完整且缺乏细节。建议学习正确的时态和句子结构，增加具体细节，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have lent money to others before. When I was in primary school, I lent some money to a classmate, but unfortunately, he has not returned it until now.

× No, I don't like borrowing money from others as I think.

✓ No, I don't like borrowing money from others because I think it causes misunderstanding or pressure.

句子中使用了不完整的表达“as I think”，应改为更合适的连接词“because”引导原因状语从句，使句子完整且符合语法。

× It's cause misunderstanding or pressure.

✓ It causes misunderstanding or pressure.

“It's cause”结构错误，应使用第三人称单数动词形式“causes”，且“cause”应为动词形式。

× For example, when people borrow money, they often want to buy expensive things, but I prefer.

✓ For example, when people borrow money, they often want to buy expensive things, but I don't.

句子末尾“but I prefer”不完整，缺少宾语，需补充完整表达“but I don't”表示否定前文内容。

× Yes, I ever lend money to others.

✓ Yes, I have lent money to others.

“ever”通常与现在完成时连用，动词“lend”应使用过去分词“lent”，构成现在完成时“have lent”。

× When I was a primary school student I went into my classmates.

✓ When I was a primary school student, I went to my classmate's house.

“went into my classmates”表达不完整且不准确，应补充具体地点，如“classmate's house”，并加逗号分隔时间状语。

× He don't give me back until now.

✓ He hasn't given it back to me until now.

主语“he”是第三人称单数，动词应使用“doesn't”或现在完成时“hasn't given”，且“give back”应用完成时态表达动作未完成。