MoneyPart 1 Informe

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Part 1

Examinador

Have you ever borrowed money from others?

Candidato

Yes I had. Few years ago I went out with my friends to have lunch but then I found that I didn't brought enough money. So I asked my friend to borrow some money for me to pay for this meal.

Examinador

Have you ever lent money to others?

Candidato

Yes I have. Few years ago my friend and I went out for lunch and one of my friends didn't bring enough money with her. So I lend her some money to pay for this meal and.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 5.5Fluidez y coherencia: 5.5Pronunciación: 5.5Gramática: 5.5Recurso léxico: 5.5

Part 1

Have you ever borrowed money from others?

Puntuación: 70.0

Sugerencia: 你的回答有些語法錯誤,例如「didn't brought」應為「didn't bring」。建議你在回答時注意動詞時態和語法正確性。此外,回答可以更自然且精簡,避免冗長。你可以嘗試用連接詞使句子更流暢,例如使用「so」或「because」。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. A few years ago, I went out to lunch with my friends, but I realized I didn't bring enough money, so I asked one of them to lend me some to pay for the meal.

Have you ever lent money to others?

Puntuación: 65.0

Sugerencia: 你的回答中有語法錯誤,例如「lend」應該用過去式「lent」。句子結尾不完整,建議回答時注意完整表達想法。你可以使用連接詞如「because」或「so」來使句子更連貫。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. A few years ago, my friend and I went out for lunch, and since she didn't bring enough money, I lent her some to cover the meal.

Gramática

Past tense issue

× Yes I had.

Yes, I have.

The question uses the present perfect tense 'Have you ever borrowed', so the answer should also be in present perfect tense 'I have' instead of past perfect 'I had'. In English (Taiwan), we use 'have' to indicate experience up to now.

Singular and plural issue

× Few years ago I went out with my friends to have lunch but then I found that I didn't brought enough money.

A few years ago I went out with my friends to have lunch but then I found that I didn't bring enough money.

'Few years ago' should be 'A few years ago' to indicate some years in the past. Also, after 'didn't' the base form of the verb 'bring' should be used, not the past tense 'brought'. In English (Taiwan), after 'did not' we use the base verb form.

Verb in the past participle form

× So I asked my friend to borrow some money for me to pay for this meal.

So I asked my friend to lend me some money to pay for this meal.

The verb 'borrow' means to take money from someone, but here the student is asking the friend to give money, so the correct verb is 'lend'. Also, 'lend me some money' is the correct phrase. In English (Taiwan), 'lend' is used when giving money temporarily.

Past tense issue

× Few years ago my friend and I went out for lunch and one of my friends didn't bring enough money with her.

A few years ago my friend and I went out for lunch and one of my friends didn't bring enough money with her.

Same as before, 'Few years ago' should be 'A few years ago' to be grammatically correct. In English (Taiwan), 'a few' is used to indicate some quantity.

Past tense issue

× So I lend her some money to pay for this meal and.

So I lent her some money to pay for this meal.

The verb 'lend' in past tense is 'lent', not 'lend'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'and.', so the 'and' should be removed. In English (Taiwan), past actions require past tense verbs.

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