Money— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer direct and clear: state whether you have borrowed money, give a short reason and a specific example. Reduce repetition and grammar errors, use a topic sentence plus one or two supportive details. Use linking words like "because" or "when" correctly and avoid long, unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have borrowed money from others sometimes. For example, when I was a child my parents paid my school fees and I didn’t understand money management, so later I had to borrow from friends to cover small expenses. Because of that experience, I now try to plan my budget more carefully.

Sugerencia: Answer clearly: say whether you lend money, explain why and give a specific example or condition (e.g., emergencies). Remove filler words and repetition, use linking words like "because" and "for example", and keep it within 3–4 sentences with accurate grammar and vocabulary.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often lend money to family and close friends when they need it. For example, I once lent my sister some money for an urgent car repair because she had no savings. I usually do this for emergencies, but I make sure to agree on when I will be repaid.

× Yes, I prefer borrowed money from others because because whenever, when, when I was child, I always I my parents always give me tuition fee and after that I realize what about money and what kind of this.

✓ Yes, I preferred borrowing money from others because whenever I was a child, my parents always gave me tuition fees, and after that I realized what money is and how it works.

Errors: present tense used incorrectly with past context and wrong verb forms. Use past tense 'preferred' and 'gave' for past habits. Change 'borrowed money' (simple past) to 'borrowing money' after 'preferred' or use 'preferred to borrow'. 'I was child' missing article 'a'. 'Tuition fee' should be plural 'tuition fees' if repeated. 'realize' should be past 'realized'. 'what about money and what kind of this' is ungrammatical; replace with 'what money is and how it works' for clarity. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for childhood events and correct noun phrases and gerunds.

× Yes, I think, uh, lend money to others because, uh, because, uh, so my, because uh, uh, always my family and uh, friend, uh, they can, they can need our money. I always prefer I I always helpful for any emergency.

✓ Yes, I think lending money to others is good because my family and friends sometimes need money. I always prefer to help and I am always willing to help in any emergency.

Errors: incorrect verb form after 'think' — use gerund 'lending' or 'to lend'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends'. 'They can need' is unnatural; use 'they sometimes need' or 'they may need'. 'I always prefer I I always helpful' is ungrammatical — use 'I always prefer to help' and the adjective 'helpful' must be used with a verb or 'I am helpful'. Better: 'I am always willing to help'. Suggestion: Use gerunds after 'think' when describing opinions about actions, ensure correct plural nouns, and use appropriate auxiliary verbs and structures ('am willing', 'prefer to').