Money— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevaplarınızı daha net ve düzenli hale getirmek için kısa, doğrudan bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın ve ardından durumu açıklayan 1–2 destek cümlesi ekleyin. Gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu kelimelerini (uh, umm) azaltın. Ayrıca zaman ve koşul gibi spesifik bilgiler verin (ör. “last year”, “when I didn’t have cash”, “I always repay”). Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizi daha anlamlı bağlayın (for example, so, because).

Ejemplo: Yes, I have borrowed money from others on a few occasions. For example, last year I borrowed £50 from a friend when my bank card was lost, and I repaid it within a week because I had my salary coming. I always make sure to return money as soon as possible so I don’t create problems.

Sugerencia: Cevabınızı mantıklı bir yapı ile verin: net bir konu cümlesi (evet veya hayır), ardından nedenleri ve bir örnek. Kısa ve uygun kelimeler kullanın; dilbilgisi hatalarından kaçının (örn. “I am helpful”, “people need money”). Gereksiz tekrarları ve belirsiz ifadeleri kaldırın. Bağlaçlarla neden-sonuç ilişkisini gösterin (for example, so, because).

Ejemplo: Yes, I often lend money to friends and family because I consider myself a helpful person. For instance, last month I lent £100 to a colleague who had an emergency, and I asked him to return it next month. I only lend when I trust the person and when I’m sure I can afford it.

× Uh, at some yes, sometimes I have uh borrowed money from others, uh, as long as I back on back money to umm people. Umm, sometimes I need to money.

✓ Yes, sometimes I have borrowed money from others, as long as I pay back the money to people. Sometimes I need money.

The sentence contains incorrect tense usage and verb forms. Use present perfect 'have borrowed' correctly but follow with present simple or infinitive constructions: 'pay back' (not 'back on back money'). Also remove unnecessary filler words. 'I need to money' is missing the correct noun form; use 'I need money.' Suggestions: use 'pay back' for returning money, and use 'need money' (no 'to'). Keep tense consistent and remove fillers. Additionally, ensure subject-verb agreement and correct word order: 'I have borrowed money' then 'I pay back the money' or 'I have paid back the money' if referring to past action.

× Yes, absolutely I am help a full person. Sometimes people need to money. Therefore I have lent money to people which can be connected, which can be, which can broad.

✓ Yes, absolutely I am a helpful person. Sometimes people need money. Therefore I have lent money to people who are close to me or who I can trust.

Multiple errors: 'help a full person' is incorrect word formation; use the adjective 'helpful' and include the article 'a' before a singular noun: 'I am a helpful person' (article error and adjective formation). 'need to money' should be 'need money' (wrong use of infinitive). 'which can be connected' is grammatically incorrect when referring to people; use a relative clause with 'who' for people and clearer vocabulary such as 'close to me' or 'I can trust.' Suggestions: use 'a helpful person', 'need money', and 'people who' for referring to people, and choose precise verbs or adjectives like 'close' or 'trustworthy.'