App— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không phù hợp (ví dụ: 'headphone' không đúng ngữ cảnh). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng chính xác hơn để làm cho câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ejemplo: Recently, I downloaded an app called 'I Am Speaking' to practice my speaking skills. It records my voice and provides feedback to help me improve.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời trở nên mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, nên sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

Ejemplo: I am usually interested in modern technology apps because I love exploring new trends that people are excited about. It is always thrilling to discover these innovations.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, từ vựng phù hợp và liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và logic hơn.

Ejemplo: There are several ways I find new apps. For example, my friends often recommend apps to me after trying and reviewing them, so I usually listen to their opinions and try the apps myself.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời một cách mạch lạc hơn, tránh câu ngắt quãng và sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý. Đồng thời, nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ejemplo: In the future, I would like to try singing apps because I want to improve my singing skills. This will help me feel more confident when singing in public with my friends or family.

× Well read recently I download.

✓ Well, I recently downloaded.

The sentence lacks the past tense form of the verb 'download'. The correct past tense is 'downloaded' to indicate a completed action in the past.

× I found it very headphone because it it will record it my speaking and give me some solution to improve.

✓ I found it very helpful because it records my speaking and gives me some suggestions to improve.

The word 'headphone' is incorrectly used as an adjective; the correct adjective is 'helpful'. Also, 'it it will record it my speaking' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'it records my speaking'. 'Some solution' should be plural 'some suggestions' to match the context.

× Well, I usually interested in technique in modern and technology app because I would love to explore new technology that people are interested in nowadays.

✓ Well, I am usually interested in modern technology apps because I would love to explore new technology that people are interested in nowadays.

The verb 'interested' requires the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present tense 'I am interested'. Also, 'technique in modern and technology app' is incorrect; it should be 'modern technology apps'.

× I felt it had phone in also thrilling to explore this new thing.

✓ I feel it is also thrilling to explore this new thing.

The phrase 'had phone in' is incorrect and unclear; it should be removed. The verb tense should be present 'I feel' to match the ongoing interest. 'Thrilling' is correctly used as an adjective here.

× Well, there's more. There's multiple ways that I can file knew apps.

✓ Well, there are multiple ways that I can find new apps.

'There's' is a contraction of 'there is' which is singular; since 'ways' is plural, it should be 'there are'. 'File knew apps' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'find new apps'.

× For example I usually are recommended by my friends, they will try some app an an review it for May, so therefore I will dialogue and try for myself.

✓ For example, I am usually recommended apps by my friends; they try some apps and review them for me, so I will download and try them myself.

'I usually are recommended' is incorrect; it should be 'I am usually recommended'. 'An an review it for May' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'try some apps and review them for me'. 'Dialogue' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'download'.

× Well, I think I will try. I singing apps.

✓ Well, I think I will try singing apps.

The sentence is fragmented; 'I will try' should be followed directly by the object 'singing apps' without a period. Also, 'I singing apps' is incorrect; it should be 'try singing apps'.

× To make me feel more confident when I have some public singing with my friends or family members.

✓ To make me feel more confident when I sing in public with my friends or family members.

The phrase 'have some public singing' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'sing in public'. The preposition 'in' is necessary here.