App— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: In English (Cambodia), you should try to make your answers clearer and more natural by using complete sentences and linking words. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you use these apps, and give a specific example with linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: Recently, I have used several apps such as Telegram, Messenger, Facebook, Instagram, and TikTok. I find these apps very important because they help me socialize and feel relaxed. For example, I usually use Telegram because it allows me to chat with my friends easily and stay updated with news.

Sugerencia: You should improve your vocabulary and sentence structure to make your answer clearer and more natural. Use correct words and link your ideas logically. For example, clearly state the type of apps you like, explain why, and give a specific example with linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Ejemplo: I am usually interested in educational apps because they help me study and improve my knowledge. For example, the app Duolingo helps me improve my language skills, so I can complete my tasks more easily.

Sugerencia: Try to organize your answer with clear sentences and use linking words to connect ideas. In English (Cambodia), you can say that you find out about apps through recommendations from friends and family, and give a specific example. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: I usually find out about different apps through recommendations from my friends and family. For example, when they discover a unique app, they often share it with me, especially if it is useful for studying or entertainment.

Sugerencia: You should give a clear and complete answer with correct sentence structure. In English (Cambodia), say which app you want to use and explain why with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words to make your answer logical and easy to understand.

Ejemplo: In the future, I would like to use Facebook more because it helps me get information from outside my country. Also, I can spend time watching interesting videos and stay connected with people around the world.

× Reason later use manual such as telegram, messenger, Facebook, Instagram or TikTok.

✓ I recently used apps such as Telegram, Messenger, Facebook, Instagram, or TikTok.

The original sentence lacks a proper verb and correct tense. 'Reason later use manual' is unclear and ungrammatical. The correction uses the present perfect tense 'I recently used' to answer the question about recent app usage clearly.

× Really important for me because I can socializing and feel relaxed.

✓ They are really important for me because I can socialize and feel relaxed.

'Really important' needs a subject, so 'They are' is added. 'Socializing' is a gerund, but here the verb 'socialize' is needed in base form after 'can'. The correction fixes subject and verb form.

× For example I usually use telegram because.

✓ For example, I usually use Telegram because it helps me communicate easily.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding a reason completes the sentence and improves clarity.

× I'm usually interested in educational pampered activity names.

✓ I'm usually interested in educational and pampered activity apps.

'Activity names' is incorrect; 'apps' fits the context. Also, 'pampered' seems incorrect; possibly 'pampered' is a mishearing or typo. Assuming 'pampered' is incorrect, it is replaced with 'and' to connect adjectives properly.

× I think those app are really important for me because I can use them for studying and to improve my knowledge.

✓ I think those apps are really important for me because I can use them for studying and improving my knowledge.

'App' should be plural 'apps' to agree with 'those'. Also, 'to improve' is changed to gerund 'improving' for parallel structure.

× For example the app to lingo can help me to improve my skill, then I can complete my task easily so.

✓ For example, the app Duolingo can help me improve my skills, so I can complete my tasks easily.

'To lingo' is corrected to 'Duolingo' (assuming the app name). 'Skill' and 'task' should be plural to match general meaning. 'To improve' is simplified to 'improve'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Yes, and I find how is everybody friends have said all recommendation from my friends and family because they often share useful for studying then for entertaining.

✓ Yes, I find out about different apps through recommendations from my friends and family because they often share useful apps for studying and entertainment.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. It is rephrased to clearly express how the student learns about apps via friends' recommendations.

× For example, when they discovered a unique app, they usually.

✓ For example, when they discover a unique app, they usually share it with me.

The sentence is incomplete. Adding 'share it with me' completes the thought and improves clarity.

× I would say Facebook is that I like to use in the future because.

✓ I would say Facebook is the app I would like to use in the future because it provides useful information.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Is that I like to use' is incorrect; corrected to 'is the app I would like to use'. The sentence is completed with a reason.

× Is opposite app to get information outside than inside your country.

✓ It is an app to get information from outside my country rather than inside.

'Opposite app to get information outside than inside your country' is ungrammatical. Correct prepositions and comparative structure are used in the correction.

× Also be spending time in visible to watch it a little push.

✓ Also, I spend time watching videos and browsing on it during my free time.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. It is rephrased to express the intended meaning clearly.