App— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: حاول تحسين قواعد اللغة واستخدام الضمائر بشكل صحيح، بالإضافة إلى استخدام كلمات ربط لتوضيح الأفكار بشكل أفضل.

Ejemplo: I have recently used Snapchat because it helps me relax and communicate with my friends and family around the world. Moreover, it allows me to make video calls and catch up with them easily.

Sugerencia: ركز على تحسين تركيب الجمل واستخدام كلمات ربط لتسلسل الأفكار، واحرص على استخدام مفردات مناسبة للسياق.

Ejemplo: I usually use many apps for playing games and studying on my phone. However, I especially prefer social media apps because they help me stay updated with news, fashion, and trends around the world.

Sugerencia: حاول استخدام جمل أكثر وضوحًا وتنظيمًا، واستخدم ضمائر وأفعال بشكل صحيح مع إضافة تفاصيل داعمة.

Ejemplo: I find out about different apps through my friends and family who tell me about them. Also, social media platforms introduce many apps that people can enjoy worldwide.

Sugerencia: حاول تحسين قواعد اللغة واستخدام مفردات دقيقة، بالإضافة إلى تنظيم الأفكار بشكل منطقي مع استخدام كلمات ربط مناسبة.

Ejemplo: In the future, I would like to use social apps that help us explore fashion and become more useful. Additionally, these apps can help us make new friends and learn new languages.

× I think Snapchat because it help me to relax and communicate with my friend and families around the world.

✓ I think Snapchat because it helps me to relax and communicate with my friends and family around the world.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'Snapchat'. Also, 'friend' and 'families' should be pluralized correctly to 'friends' and 'family' respectively, but since 'family' can be singular or plural, 'family' is more appropriate here.

× I think Snapchat because it help me to relax and communicate with my friend and families around the world.

✓ I think Snapchat because it helps me to relax and communicate with my friends and family around the world.

The word 'friend' should be pluralized to 'friends' to indicate multiple people, and 'families' should be 'family' as it refers collectively to relatives.

× Also that can help me to call them video call and catch up with them.

✓ Also, it can help me to video call them and catch up with them.

The pronoun 'that' is incorrectly used to refer to Snapchat; 'it' is the correct pronoun for singular objects. Also, the phrase 'call them video call' is awkward; 'video call them' is the correct verb phrase.

× I used many apps that I can playing and studying at my phone, but I especially use social media because that can help me to know the news and the fashion and the trend around the world.

✓ I use many apps that I can play and study on my phone, but I especially use social media because it can help me to know the news, fashion, and trends around the world.

The verb 'used' is past tense but the context suggests present tense 'use'. 'Playing' should be 'play' to follow 'can'. 'At my phone' should be 'on my phone'. 'That' should be 'it' referring to social media. Also, 'the fashion and the trend' should be 'fashion and trends' without 'the'.

× I used many apps that I can playing and studying at my phone, but I especially use social media because that can help me to know the news and the fashion and the trend around the world.

✓ I use many apps that I can play and study on my phone, but I especially use social media because it can help me to know the news, fashion, and trends around the world.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to indicate device usage is 'on'.

× I used many apps that I can playing and studying at my phone, but I especially use social media because that can help me to know the news and the fashion and the trend around the world.

✓ I use many apps that I can play and study on my phone, but I especially use social media because it can help me to know the news, fashion, and trends around the world.

The pronoun 'that' is incorrectly used to refer to social media; 'it' is the correct pronoun for singular nouns.

× I know different apps by my friend and my families tell me that and social media.

✓ I know about different apps because my friends and family tell me about them and through social media.

'My friend and my families' should be pluralized and corrected to 'my friends and family'. The phrase 'tell me that' is unclear; 'tell me about them' is clearer. Also, 'by' should be 'because' or 'through' to indicate the source of information.

× I know different apps by my friend and my families tell me that and social media.

✓ I know about different apps because my friends and family tell me about them and through social media.

'Families' is incorrect here; 'family' is the correct collective noun.

× I know different apps by my friend and my families tell me that and social media.

✓ I know about different apps because my friends and family tell me about them and through social media.

The preposition 'by' is incorrect; 'because' or 'through' better express the cause or means.

× You can find many apps around the world and you can enjoy it.

✓ You can find many apps around the world and you can enjoy them.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'many apps' which is plural; therefore, 'them' is correct.

× I think social app because that can help us to wear many things at the fashion and being being more useful.

✓ I think social apps because they can help us to wear many things in fashion and be more useful.

'Social app' should be plural 'social apps' to match context. 'That' should be 'they' to refer to plural 'apps'. 'At the fashion' is incorrect; 'in fashion' is correct. 'Being being' is a repetition and should be 'be'.

× I think social app because that can help us to wear many things at the fashion and being being more useful.

✓ I think social apps because they can help us to wear many things in fashion and be more useful.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect; 'in fashion' is the correct phrase.

× Also we can have a new friend and learning new languages.

✓ Also, we can make new friends and learn new languages.

'Have a new friend' is less natural than 'make new friends'. 'Learning' should be 'learn' to match the modal verb 'can'.