App— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, nên thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

Ejemplo: Recently, I have been using an English learning app because I need to improve my speaking, reading, listening, and writing skills to prepare for the IELTS exam.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý một cách tự nhiên hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và thêm chi tiết cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I am usually interested in novel and art apps because they help me relax after work. For example, I like reading novels on my phone to unwind in the evening.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn còn lủng củng và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Đồng thời, nên cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về cách bạn tìm kiếm ứng dụng.

Ejemplo: I usually find different apps by searching on social media platforms like Facebook and TikTok, where many people recommend useful English learning apps.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trúc ngữ pháp đúng để truyền đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh lỗi chính tả và dùng từ phù hợp với ngữ cảnh. Nên giải thích rõ hơn về loại ứng dụng bạn muốn sử dụng và lý do.

Ejemplo: In the future, I would like to use entertainment apps because they are convenient for relaxing after a hard day at work, helping me to relieve stress and anger.

× I really have used English app.

✓ I have really used English apps.

The noun 'app' should be plural 'apps' because the context implies multiple applications. In English, countable nouns need to be plural when referring to more than one item.

× I am required and IL certificates so I have to improve for skills in English speaking, reading, listening and writing.

✓ I need to get IELTS certificates, so I have to improve my skills in English speaking, reading, listening, and writing.

The phrase 'I am required and IL certificates' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'I need to get IELTS certificates'. Also, 'improve for skills' should be 'improve my skills'. The possessive pronoun 'my' is necessary here.

× I very interesting in novel art.

✓ I am very interested in novel art.

The adjective 'interesting' is incorrectly used. The correct form is 'interested' to describe a person's feeling. Also, the verb 'am' is needed to form the present continuous tense.

× I think it's convenient was when I want to relax my chest.

✓ I think it's convenient when I want to relax my mind.

The phrase 'convenient was' is incorrect; 'was' should be removed. Also, 'relax my chest' is not a common expression; 'relax my mind' is more appropriate. The preposition 'when' is correctly used here.

× I really like reading books, so sometimes I want to read novels immediately after work.

✓ I really like reading books, so sometimes I want to read novels immediately after work.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no changes needed.

× I am preparing for IL speaking text so I find out so many app to learning English and at that time in Facebook or Tiktok there are so many recommend for me to find the.

✓ I am preparing for the IELTS speaking test, so I found many apps to learn English. At that time, on Facebook or TikTok, there were many recommendations for me to find them.

The phrase 'so many app' should be 'many apps' because 'app' is countable and plural is needed. 'Find out' is incorrect here; 'found' is better. 'To learning' should be 'to learn'. 'Recommend' should be 'recommendations'. Also, 'find the' is incomplete; 'find them' is correct.

× I would like to use some entitlement app in the future.

✓ I would like to use some entertainment apps in the future.

The word 'entitlement' is incorrect; the correct word is 'entertainment'. Also, 'app' should be plural 'apps' to match 'some'. The modal verb 'would like to' is correctly used.

× I think it's so convenient for me.

✓ I think it's very convenient for me.

While 'so convenient' is not incorrect, 'very convenient' is more formal and appropriate in this context.

× After a hard working time I can visit this app and release my dress or angry for example.

✓ After a hard working day, I can use this app to release my stress or anger, for example.

'Hard working time' should be 'hard working day'. 'Visit this app' is incorrect; 'use this app' is correct. 'Release my dress or angry' is incorrect; it should be 'release my stress or anger'. The preposition 'to' is needed before 'release'.