App— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答不够完整且有语法错误，句子结构不清晰，且最后一句话未完成。建议回答时注意句子完整性，避免重复和语法错误。

Ejemplo: Recently, I have used the WeChat app. It is a communication app that allows people to send messages and make video calls conveniently.

Sugerencia: 回答中断，句子未完成，缺少连贯性。建议回答时注意句子完整，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ejemplo: Actually, I like entertainment apps, such as the Bidi Bidi app, which offers various funny videos. I really enjoy it because it makes me feel happy and relaxed.

Sugerencia: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议回答时注意逻辑顺序，句子完整，并使用连接词。

Ejemplo: There are many ways to find different apps. For example, my friends often recommend entertainment apps like Billy Billy or Xiaohong Shu, and my classmates suggest other useful apps.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用错误，如“bad clothes”和“necessitation”。建议加强词汇准确性和句子结构，避免错误表达。

Ejemplo: In the future, I would like to use shopping apps such as Taobao. I enjoy buying clothes and other necessities online because they often offer discounts, which help me save money.

× It is a communication app which is very convenient for people to communicate by the messages or have a video.

✓ It is a communication app which is very convenient for people to communicate by messages or have a video call.

这里“by the messages”中的“the”使用不当，应该去掉定冠词，直接用复数名词“messages”。另外，“have a video”表达不完整，应该是“have a video call”，表示进行视频通话。

× And it is.

✓ And it is very useful.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和补充信息，导致表达不清晰。需要补充完整句子，使其表达完整。

× My friends often recommend me for some entertainment apps, for example the Billy Billy app or Xiaohong Shu, and my classmates recommend me some apps for example to find.

✓ My friends often recommend some entertainment apps to me, for example the Bilibili app or Xiaohongshu, and my classmates recommend some apps to me as well.

动词recommend后面接人时，应该用“recommend something to someone”，而不是“recommend someone for something”。另外，句子后半部分结构混乱，需要调整顺序和表达，使其更通顺。

× I like bad clothes or other items, even necessitation online because it can give me some discount, I can save money.

✓ I like buying clothes or other items online because it can give me some discounts, so I can save money.

原句中“bad clothes”应为“buy clothes”，且“necessitation”用词错误，应为“buying”或“shopping”。“some discount”应为复数“some discounts”，且句子结构需要调整，使表达更自然。