App— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“have recently use”应为“have recently used”。此外，表达可以更自然流畅，避免重复“on it”，并且可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: I have recently used apps like WeChat and TikTok. I usually use WeChat to keep in touch with my friends and family. Meanwhile, TikTok offers many entertaining and funny videos that help me relax.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在表达不清和语法错误，如“after visiting”不明确，且“on it”重复使用。建议使用更准确的表达，并增加连接词使内容更连贯。

Ejemplo: I am usually interested in entertaining apps such as TikTok, Redbook, and Song. I think these apps help people relax and unwind after a busy day because they offer a variety of fun and engaging videos.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，如“they are discovered by themselves”不通顺。建议改进句子结构，使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: I usually find out about different apps through recommendations from my friends and family, who often share useful apps they have discovered themselves. Moreover, I also explore new apps on the Apple App Store.

Sugerencia: 回答内容不够清晰，表达“photo retouches of the wall better”不准确。建议明确表达想使用的应用类型，并使用更自然的句子结构。

Ejemplo: In the future, I would like to use photo editing apps. For example, after attending a party, friends often share group photos taken at restaurants, and if someone is not satisfied with their appearance, they can use these apps to enhance the photos.

× I have recently use some apps like WeChat and TikTok often.

✓ I have recently used some apps like WeChat and TikTok often.

这里使用的是现在完成时态，动词应该用过去分词形式。'use'的过去分词是'used'，所以应改为'have recently used'。

× TikTok always provides many entertaining and funny videos on it which help me relax.

✓ TikTok always provides many entertaining and funny videos which help me relax.

'provide videos on it'中的'on it'是不必要的，英语中通常直接说'provide videos'，去掉'on it'更自然。

× In my opinion, they can make people relax and unwind after visiting because they have a lot of fun and entertaining videos on it.

✓ In my opinion, they can make people relax and unwind after visiting because they have a lot of fun and entertaining videos on them.

这里指代复数名词'apps'，应该用复数形式的介词短语'on them'，而不是'on it'。

× I usually find out about different apps through recommendations from my friends and families.

✓ I usually find out about different apps through recommendations from my friends and family.

'family'作为集合名词，通常不加复数形式，'families'不合适，应改为'single family'形式。

× As they often share useful or fundamental apps they are discovered by themselves.

✓ As they often share useful or fundamental apps they have discovered by themselves.

这里时态错误，应该用现在完成时'have discovered'表示他们已经发现的应用。

× I like photo retouches of the wall better.

✓ I like photo retouching apps better.

'photo retouches of the wall'表达不清且不自然，应该用'photo retouching apps'表示修图应用。

× If you are not satisfied with yourself in the photo, you can beautify the photo.

✓ If you are not satisfied with how you look in the photo, you can beautify the photo.

'yourself in the photo'表达不准确，应该用'how you look in the photo'更自然。