App— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cavabınızda cümlə quruluşunu və qrammatikanı yaxşılaşdırmaq üçün diqqət yetirin. Daha aydın və qısa cümlələr qurun, məsələn, "I have recently used many apps, but I use Instagram the most because I have a lot of free time. These days, I often scroll through videos on Instagram."

Ejemplo: I have recently used many apps, but Instagram is my favorite because I have a lot of free time. These days, I often scroll through short videos on Instagram to relax.

Sugerencia: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlardan qaçın və daha düzgün qrammatik quruluş istifadə edin. Məsələn, "I am usually interested in apps like TikTok or Instagram where I can watch short videos. I also enjoy texting my friends using messaging apps."

Ejemplo: I usually like apps such as TikTok and Instagram because I can watch short, interesting videos. Additionally, I enjoy using messaging apps to chat with my friends.

Sugerencia: Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və məntiqli etmək üçün keçid sözlərindən istifadə edin. Məsələn, "I usually find new apps by watching short videos and advertisements, which help me discover apps that suit my interests."

Ejemplo: I usually discover new apps by watching short videos and advertisements online, which help me find apps that are suitable for me.

Sugerencia: Cavabınızı daha aydın və qısa edin, həmçinin fikrinizi daha yaxşı ifadə etmək üçün düzgün qrammatika istifadə edin. Məsələn, "I don't have a specific app in mind for the future because I only download apps that interest me."

Ejemplo: I don't have any particular apps in mind that I want to use in the future because I prefer to download only the apps that interest me.

× I have recently used lots of apps but Instagram is one of them that because of having free lots of free time I use.

✓ I have recently used lots of apps, but Instagram is one of them that I use because I have a lot of free time.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and redundancy ('because of having free lots of free time'). The phrase should be 'because I have a lot of free time' to be grammatically correct and clear.

× I scroll videos on Instagram a lot in these days.

✓ I scroll through videos on Instagram a lot these days.

The phrase 'in these days' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'these days'. Also, 'scroll videos' should be 'scroll through videos' to correctly express the action.

× I'm usually interested in the apps that are like Tiktok or Instagram where I can watch short wheels or videos that are interesting for me.

✓ I'm usually interested in apps like TikTok or Instagram where I can watch short reels or videos that are interesting to me.

'The apps that are like' is better as 'apps like' for natural expression. 'Short wheels' is incorrect; the correct term is 'short reels'. Also, 'interesting for me' should be 'interesting to me'.

× And also I love texting with my friends and also uses those programs programs for texting.

✓ And also I love texting with my friends and also use those programs for texting.

The verb 'uses' does not agree with the subject 'I'. The correct form is 'use' for the first person singular.

× I usually find new apps by watching videos like short videos or some advertisements which are really helpful for me to find new apps that are indeed for me.

✓ I usually find new apps by watching short videos or some advertisements which are really helpful for me to find new apps that are suitable for me.

The phrase 'videos like short videos' is redundant; 'watching short videos' is sufficient. Also, 'that are indeed for me' is awkward; 'that are suitable for me' is clearer.

× That's why there's no an app that I'm really interested to download.

✓ That's why there isn't an app that I'm really interested in downloading.

The phrase 'there's no an app' is incorrect; it should be 'there isn't an app'. Also, 'interested to download' should be 'interested in downloading' to use the correct preposition and gerund form.