Traffic— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: คำตอบของคุณควรปรับปรุงเรื่องความชัดเจนและโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้องมากขึ้น รวมถึงการใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้คำตอบลื่นไหลและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น เช่น การใช้ "because" และ "so" อย่างเหมาะสม และควรหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อนหรือผิดไวยากรณ์ เช่น "must who use" ควรเป็น "must use"

Ejemplo: I live near a school, so there are several crosswalks in my area because many students walk to school. Therefore, these crosswalks are very important and make it safe for the students to cross the road.

Sugerencia: คำตอบนี้ควรปรับปรุงเรื่องความชัดเจนของความคิดและการใช้ไวยากรณ์ให้ถูกต้อง รวมถึงการใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดอย่างเหมาะสม เช่น การใช้ "because" และ "so" อย่างถูกต้อง นอกจากนี้ควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและถูกต้อง เช่น "bad driving" แทน "bad of driving's" และควรอธิบายให้ชัดเจนว่าต้องการเปลี่ยนแปลงอะไรในกฎจราจร

Ejemplo: If I could change something about the traffic, I would improve the traffic rules because nowadays some drivers do not drive safely. This makes it dangerous for pedestrians crossing at crosswalks, so stricter rules would help protect them.

× The place that I leave is near the school, so of course that you have several crosswalks because there's some students have to walk to school.

✓ The place that I live is near the school, so of course there are several crosswalks because some students have to walk to school.

The word 'leave' is incorrectly used instead of 'live'. Also, 'there's some students' is incorrect because 'there's' is a contraction of 'there is' which is singular, but 'students' is plural. It should be 'there are some students'. The pronoun 'that you have' is unnecessary and confusing here.

× So they must who use the crosswalk for go to school and is it's very safe for the student.

✓ So they must use the crosswalk to go to school, and it is very safe for the students.

The phrase 'must who use' is incorrect; 'must' should be followed directly by the base verb 'use'. 'For go' should be 'to go'. 'Is it's' is redundant; 'it is' or 'it's' is sufficient. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to match the context.

× If I can change about the traffic, I will change at root of traffic, because in our days have some people that have a bad of driving's and it will not save for people who passed the crosswalk.

✓ If I could change the traffic, I would change the root of the traffic problem, because nowadays there are some people who have bad driving skills and it is not safe for people who cross the crosswalk.

'Change about the traffic' is incorrect; 'change the traffic' is better. 'Change at root of traffic' should be 'change the root of the traffic problem'. 'In our days' should be 'nowadays'. 'Have some people that have a bad of driving's' is incorrect; it should be 'there are some people who have bad driving skills'. 'It will not save' should be 'it is not safe'. 'People who passed the crosswalk' should be 'people who cross the crosswalk'.

× So the rule will manage the people to manage this type of people.

✓ So the rules will help manage these types of people.

'The rule will manage the people to manage this type of people' is awkward and incorrect. 'Rules' is plural. 'Manage the people to manage' is redundant. It should be 'rules will help manage these types of people'.