Part 1
Examinador
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?
Candidato
Of course. Yeah, because the local government want to. When I come there resident to be Schaefer in the street. Nice students.
Examinador
Is there anything you would like to change aboutthe traffic in your area?
Candidato
Oh well, in my country a lot of people use motorcycles which make the city more pollution. So I would like to encourage people to eat public transportation like buses or metro to reduce pollution and friendly to invite.
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the place where you live?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Ngoài ra, bạn nên cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
Ejemplo: Yes, there are many crosswalks around my neighborhood because the local government prioritizes pedestrian safety. For example, they have installed several zebra crossings near schools and busy streets to help residents cross safely.
Is there anything you would like to change about the traffic in your area?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác, đồng thời trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về lý do và cách thay đổi bạn muốn thực hiện.
Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to improve the traffic by reducing the number of motorcycles, which cause a lot of pollution. Therefore, I would encourage people to use public transportation such as buses and the metro, which are more environmentally friendly and can help reduce traffic congestion.
× Of course. Yeah, because the local government want to.
✓ Of course. Yeah, because the local government wants to.
The subject 'local government' is singular, so the verb should be 'wants' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement error.
× When I come there resident to be Schaefer in the street.
✓ When I come there, residents are safer in the street.
The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It seems to attempt to say that residents are safer in the street when the speaker comes there. The correction fixes sentence structure and clarity.
× Nice students.
✓ There are nice students.
The phrase 'Nice students' is a fragment and lacks a verb. Adding 'There are' makes it a complete sentence. This is an incorrect use of adjectives and sentence structure.
× Oh well, in my country a lot of people use motorcycles which make the city more pollution.
✓ Oh well, in my country a lot of people use motorcycles which make the city more polluted.
The word 'pollution' is a noun, but the sentence requires an adjective to describe the city. 'Polluted' is the correct adjective form. This is an incorrect use of adjectives.
× So I would like to encourage people to eat public transportation like buses or metro to reduce pollution and friendly to invite.
✓ So I would like to encourage people to use public transportation like buses or the metro to reduce pollution and be more environmentally friendly.
The verb 'eat' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'use' when referring to public transportation. Also, 'friendly to invite' is unclear and corrected to 'be more environmentally friendly' for clarity. This is a modal verb and word choice error.