Traffic— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?
Candidato
No, there aren't many crosswalk around the area where I live because in my city most people have a tendency to travel by car or motorbike rather than walking. This is one of the drawback aspect that I really don't like because it's dangerous for people who walk in the street.
Examinador
Is there anything you would like to change aboutthe traffic in your area?
Candidato
Just if I have a chance to change about the traffic in my area, the first thing would be the vehicles that people used to travel now in my city. My city now stays facing with serious air conditions like the air pollution.
Evaluación
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Part 1
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the place where you live?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, bạn nên dùng 'crosswalks' thay vì 'crosswalk' khi nói số nhiều. Ngoài ra, câu thứ hai hơi dài và có thể chia nhỏ để tránh lặp từ và làm câu rõ ràng hơn. Bạn cũng nên dùng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ejemplo: No, there aren't many crosswalks around where I live because most people prefer to travel by car or motorbike rather than walking. As a result, this is a drawback since it makes walking on the streets quite dangerous.
Is there anything you would like to change about the traffic in your area?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý cách dùng từ và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, 'Just if I have a chance to change about the traffic' không đúng ngữ pháp, nên dùng 'If I had a chance to change the traffic'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng và dùng từ nối để liên kết ý. Bạn cũng nên nói rõ hơn về lý do và hậu quả của vấn đề ô nhiễm không khí.
Ejemplo: If I had a chance to change the traffic in my area, I would focus on reducing the number of vehicles because heavy traffic causes serious air pollution, which affects people's health.
Gramática
× No, there aren't many crosswalk around the area where I live because in my city most people have a tendency to travel by car or motorbike rather than walking.
✓ No, there aren't many crosswalks around the area where I live because in my city most people have a tendency to travel by car or motorbike rather than walking.
The noun 'crosswalk' should be plural 'crosswalks' because it refers to 'many' crosswalks, indicating more than one. In English, countable nouns must be plural when referring to multiple items.
× This is one of the drawback aspect that I really don't like because it's dangerous for people who walk in the street.
✓ This is one of the drawback aspects that I really don't like because it's dangerous for people who walk in the street.
The phrase 'one of the' requires the noun following it to be plural. Therefore, 'aspect' should be 'aspects' to agree with 'one of the'.
× My city now stays facing with serious air conditions like the air pollution.
✓ My city is now facing serious air conditions like air pollution.
The verb phrase 'stays facing with' is incorrect. The correct form is 'is facing' to indicate the present continuous action. Also, 'air pollution' does not need 'the' before it here.
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