Traffic— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve clarity, accuracy and coherence. Use correct vocabulary ("crosswalks" not "course walk"), grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles), and concise organization: give a clear topic sentence, then one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid irrelevant or unclear phrases like "cost war" and "radio car accident."

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many crosswalks around my university. For example, most streets near the campus have clearly marked pedestrian crossings and lights, so students can walk safely. As a result, accidents involving pedestrians are rare.

Sugerencia: Be more specific and provide reasons or one suggestion even if generally satisfied. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details linked with a connector like "however" or "because." Avoid redundancy ("so I'm so OK").

Ejemplo: Generally, I’m satisfied with the traffic in my area because public transport is frequent and roads are well maintained. However, I would like to see better signage at busy intersections to improve safety for cyclists and pedestrians.

× Yes, throughout my university we have a lot of course walk that everyone can use and the cost war has impact to radio car accident.

✓ Yes, throughout my university we have a lot of crosswalks that everyone can use, and the cost of war has an impact on road accidents.

The sentence has multiple issues: incorrect noun 'course walk' should be 'crosswalks' (word choice but treated as sentence structure), plural agreement needed 'crosswalks' (singular/plural), and the phrase 'the cost war has impact to radio car accident' is ungrammatical. It likely intended 'the cost of war has an impact on road accidents.' Use plural 'accidents' for general meaning. Use preposition 'on' with 'impact' and article 'an' before 'impact.' Also add a comma before the conjunction 'and' to join two independent clauses. Suggestion: Break complex ideas into clear clauses, use correct collocations ('impact on'), and ensure nouns agree in number.

× In my opinion, I don't think we have anything to change because nowadays everything is fine for me, so I'm so OK about it.

✓ In my opinion, I don't think we need to change anything because nowadays everything is fine for me, so I'm okay with it.

The phrase 'we have anything to change' is an incorrect verb construction; use 'need to change anything' to express necessity. 'I'm so OK about it' is colloquial and awkward; 'I'm okay with it' is more natural. Also 'nowadays' fits present tense. Suggestion: Use 'need to' for expressing required actions, place 'anything' after the verb, and prefer 'okay with' for being satisfied with a situation.