Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như sử dụng sai động từ 'to shopping' thay vì 'to shop'. Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy chú ý cấu trúc câu và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy shopping because it allows me to buy things I need and helps me relax after a busy day.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần cải thiện cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Tránh lặp từ và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và giải thích rõ lý do so sánh giá cả.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to save money and make sure I get the best deal.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để mô tả cảm xúc khi chọn lựa.

Ejemplo: Sometimes it is hard for me to choose because there are many attractive products that catch my attention.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần cải thiện cách sử dụng từ vựng và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lỗi phát âm và sai chính tả như 'expression' thay vì 'expensive'. Hãy trình bày ý kiến một cách mạch lạc và có ví dụ cụ thể.

Ejemplo: I think expensive products are usually better because of higher quality, but sometimes cheaper products can be just as good.

× Absolutely I would like to shopping because I can freely buy anything I want and also shopping helped me to improve express an being charged after a busy and long day which is quite good and I like to shopping a lot.

✓ Absolutely I would like to shop because I can freely buy anything I want and also shopping helps me to express and feel recharged after a busy and long day which is quite good and I like shopping a lot.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the base form 'to shop' or the gerund 'shopping' without 'to'. 'Would like to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'would like to shop'. Also, 'shopping helped me to improve express an being charged' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it should be 'shopping helps me to express and feel recharged'. The verb tense and form need correction to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Well I always compare price when I shop because I want to save as much money as I can and also that.

✓ Well I always compare prices when I shop because I want to save as much money as I can.

The noun 'price' should be plural 'prices' because when shopping, people usually compare multiple prices, not just one. Using the singular form here is incorrect in this context.

× and also that. When I compare price when I shop but I will say for about money that I want.

✓ I compare prices when I shop because I want to save money.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It contains incomplete thoughts and incorrect conjunction use. The corrected sentence is concise and grammatically correct, expressing the intended meaning clearly.

× Well, I think that. It is difficult for me to make sure that when I shot because there's a lot of things.

✓ Well, I think that it is difficult for me to make choices when I shop because there are a lot of things.

The sentence is fragmented and contains a typo ('shot' instead of 'shop'). Also, 'make sure that' is incorrect here; it should be 'make choices'. The sentence structure is corrected to form a complete and meaningful sentence.

× And it looks sparkling and very interesting to me, which is very hard to me when my charge, when I shop.

✓ And the items look sparkling and very interesting to me, which makes it very hard for me to choose when I shop.

The phrase 'looks sparkling' is acceptable but needs context; adding 'items' clarifies the subject. 'Very hard to me when my charge' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'makes it very hard for me to choose'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct adjective/adverb use.

× Nearly expression products are better than cheaper ones because it's about the quality which expressive one will have a better quality than cheaper ones.

✓ Nearly expensive products are better than cheaper ones because it's about the quality; the expensive ones usually have better quality than cheaper ones.

'Nearly expression products' is incorrect; it should be 'Nearly expensive products' or better 'Most expensive products'. Also, 'expressive one' is incorrect; it should be 'expensive ones'. Pronouns and adjectives are corrected for proper meaning.

× But sometimes cheaper ones will have a better quality than expressive products, so it does the same thing.

✓ But sometimes cheaper ones have better quality than expensive products, so it depends on the product.

The phrase 'so it does the same thing' is unclear and incorrect. The sentence is restructured to express the intended meaning clearly. Also, 'expressive' is corrected to 'expensive'.