Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more clear and structured. Start with a direct answer, then explain why you like shopping with specific reasons. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like shopping because it gives me pleasure. When I buy something, I feel happy to have a new item for myself or as a gift for my friends and relatives. Therefore, shopping is enjoyable for me.

Sugerencia: Your answer needs to be clearer and more organized. Give a direct answer first, then explain why you compare prices with specific examples. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I compare prices because sometimes clothes are cheaper online, but in shopping malls, they can be more expensive due to taxes. So, I always check prices to get the best deal.

Sugerencia: Try to give a clear and complete answer. Start with a direct response, then explain why it is difficult with specific reasons. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear expressions. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices when I shop because there are many clothes to choose from. I like to see the clothes myself before buying, and sometimes I find many options attractive, which makes it hard to decide.

Sugerencia: Your answer should be clearer and more logical. Start with a direct opinion, then explain with specific reasons and examples. Avoid unclear phrases and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think expensive products are usually better than cheaper ones because they last longer and have better quality. For example, expensive clothes often use better materials, so they are more comfortable and durable.

× Yeah, I do like shopping, becauses shopping gives us much pleasure.

✓ Yeah, I do like shopping because shopping gives us much pleasure.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'because'. This is a common spelling error that affects sentence clarity.

× When I when I buy something for me, the time, I think that if I get this opportunity, I will have this one for me, for my.

✓ When I buy something for myself, I think that if I get this opportunity, I will have this one for me.

The sentence has repetition and unclear phrasing. 'When I when I' is redundant, and 'for me, the time' is confusing. Also, 'for me' should be 'for myself' to correctly use the reflexive pronoun.

× Friends or some kinds of relatives. So that's why I.

✓ I buy gifts for friends or some kinds of relatives. So that's why I do it.

The original sentence is incomplete and fragmented. It lacks a subject and verb, making it unclear. Completing the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yeah, I do compare prices 'cause if I watch a. If I watch at cloth in online the time it's priced like one or 2000s, but when we go for a shopping in shopping mall that time we see that the text and the price also most precious.

✓ Yeah, I do compare prices because if I look at clothes online, they are priced around one or two thousand, but when we go shopping in a mall, we see that the quality and the price are higher.

Incorrect prepositions like 'watch at' should be 'look at'. 'In online' should be 'online'. 'For a shopping' should be 'shopping'. Also, 'most precious' is incorrect; 'higher' or 'more expensive' fits better.

× Yes, it is difficult for me to make choice when I go for a shop becaused the shop have already too much clothes have their own friend I go for shopping that time I.

✓ Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices when I go shopping because the shop already has too many clothes. When I go shopping, I...

'Choice' should be plural 'choices' to match the context. 'Shop have' should be 'shop has' for subject-verb agreement. 'Too much clothes' should be 'too many clothes' because 'clothes' is countable.

× I see, I see with my own eyes. There are a lot of clothes home I do like so that's why I.

✓ I see with my own eyes that there are a lot of clothes I like, so that's why I...

The sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. Combining the ideas into one coherent sentence improves clarity.

× Yeah, I prefer that expect the products are always better than cheaper ones becauses if we buy cheaper products then that protects count live long and if we get expensive products, that time we saw the difference between cheaper or expensive.

✓ Yeah, I prefer that expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because if we buy cheaper products, they don't last long, and if we get expensive products, we can see the difference between cheaper and expensive ones.

'Expect' should be 'expensive'. 'Becauses' should be 'because'. The sentence has run-on issues and unclear phrasing that need correction for clarity.

× Like the expensive products give us too much courtesy and have been.

✓ Like, expensive products give us much better quality and last longer.

'Courtesy' is incorrect in this context; likely intended 'quality'. 'Have been' is incomplete and unclear. The sentence needs proper adjectives and completion.