Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer should be clearer and more coherent. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Try to express your feelings about shopping more naturally and provide a reason for your preference.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially online. I prefer using shopping apps because they are convenient and save time. Shopping makes me feel happy and relaxed because I can find good deals easily.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Focus on directly answering the question with clear reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because it helps me find the best deals. Additionally, I check the ingredients or quality to ensure I get good value for money.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to organise your ideas better and use linking words to explain your process.

Ejemplo: Yes, it can be difficult to make choices when shopping. I usually compare different brands and stores both online and offline, which takes time. Therefore, I spend a lot of time deciding before making a purchase.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and unclear. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with specific reasons or examples, using linking words for coherence.

Ejemplo: I don't think expensive products are always better because it depends on the situation. Sometimes cheaper products have similar quality, so it's important to check the ingredients and origin before deciding.

× I like shopping in in online.

✓ I like shopping online.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used before 'online'. The correct phrase is simply 'shopping online' without any preposition.

× I prefer using a shopping apps to buy something because it's more convenient and easy.

✓ I prefer using shopping apps to buy things because it's more convenient and easy.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used with the plural noun 'apps'. Also, 'something' is less appropriate here; 'things' fits better in this context.

× Shopping scares me more cheerful more more happy because buying some.

✓ Shopping makes me feel happier and more cheerful because I enjoy buying things.

The original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect words. 'Scares me' is incorrect here; 'makes me feel' is appropriate. Also, 'more cheerful more more happy' is redundant and incorrect; 'happier and more cheerful' is correct.

× I compare prices, ingredients and a. Martin market strategy she's also be 'cause comparing something is a quite a different way of purchasing.

✓ I compare prices, ingredients, and marketing strategies because comparing things is quite a different way of purchasing.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect phrases such as 'a. Martin market strategy she's also be'. It should be 'marketing strategies'. Also, 'comparing something is a quite a different way' is incorrect; it should be 'comparing things is quite a different way'.

× I often check different brands and stores online and offline before deciding where to buy an also I am I don't go that decision making process.

✓ I often check different brands and stores online and offline before deciding where to buy, and I don't rush the decision-making process.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunction use and unclear phrasing. 'an also I am I don't go that decision making process' is incorrect. It should be connected properly with 'and' and the phrase clarified.

× It takes a lot of time to decide.

✓ It takes a lot of time to make a decision.

The verb 'decide' is usually followed by an object or used with 'to make a decision'. 'It takes a lot of time to decide' is understandable but less natural than 'to make a decision'.

× I don't think so, becauses it depends on the situation.

✓ I don't think so because it depends on the situation.

The word 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. Also, no comma is needed before 'because' in this sentence.

× Expand. Expensive products are not always better.

✓ No correction needed.

The word 'Expand.' seems to be a note or error, but the sentence 'Expensive products are not always better.' is grammatically correct.

× Expensive products can be made in different countries and different ingredients.

✓ Expensive products can be made in different countries and with different ingredients.

The phrase 'made in different countries and different ingredients' is incorrect. The correct preposition for ingredients is 'with'.