Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và thể hiện cảm xúc cá nhân, nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'it's helped me by necessary things' nên được sửa thành 'it helps me buy necessary things'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời trở nên mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy shopping because it helps me relax after a stressful day. Moreover, it allows me to buy essential items for my daily life conveniently.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Ví dụ, 'compare fries' nên là 'compare prices', và 'my buckets are is not much' không đúng ngữ pháp và khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập cách sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng hơn.

Ejemplo: To be honest, I always compare prices when I shop because my budget is limited, so I want to make sure I get the best deal.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'make sure' nên là 'make choices', 'supermarkets has' nên là 'supermarkets have'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices when I shop because supermarkets have many good products. Therefore, I sometimes buy anything that catches my eye.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý kiến rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, ví dụ 'too expensive for its standard' nên là 'too expensive for their quality', và câu cuối không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý kiến rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và hoàn chỉnh câu.

Ejemplo: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. Many products are overpriced for their quality, and there are cheaper options that work well in daily life.

× Shopping helps me feel relaxed after a stressful day, it's helped me by necessary things to my daily life and it's so convenient.

✓ Shopping helps me feel relaxed after a stressful day, it has helped me by providing necessary things for my daily life and it's so convenient.

The phrase 'it's helped me by necessary things' is incorrect because 'helped' requires an object and a verb in the correct form. The correct form is 'it has helped me by providing necessary things'. This uses the present perfect tense with the past participle 'helped' and the gerund 'providing' to express the action clearly.

× And to be honest I always compare fries when I shop because my buckets are is not much so I buy anything. I look bright.

✓ And to be honest, I always compare prices when I shop because my budget is not much, so I don't buy just anything. I look carefully.

The word 'fries' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'prices'. 'Buckets' should be 'budget'. Also, 'are is' is incorrect subject-verb agreement. 'I buy anything' is too general and likely incorrect in context; 'I don't buy just anything' is clearer. 'I look bright' is unclear; 'I look carefully' fits the context better.

× Of course, it is so difficult for me to make sure when I shop because the supermarkets has a lot of good things.

✓ Of course, it is so difficult for me to make choices when I shop because the supermarkets have a lot of good things.

The verb 'has' does not agree with the plural subject 'supermarkets'. The correct verb form is 'have'. Also, 'make sure' is incorrect here; 'make choices' fits the context better.

× So I buy anything.

✓ So I buy anything.

This sentence is grammatically correct but semantically unclear. It may be better to say 'So I don't buy just anything' to express the intended meaning, but as per instructions, only grammar mistakes are corrected.

× I love the price and I love the standard to work with.

✓ I love the price and I love the quality of the products.

'The standard to work with' is unclear and incorrect. 'Quality of the products' is a clearer and grammatically correct phrase.

× No, I don't think so. I think so many products are too expensive for its standard. Absolutely there are many cheaper products to wash my life, but.

✓ No, I don't think so. I think many products are too expensive for their quality. Absolutely, there are many cheaper products that suit my life, though.

'So many' is better than 'so many' here. 'Its standard' should be 'their quality' to agree with plural 'products'. 'To wash my life' is incorrect; likely intended 'to suit my life'. The sentence was incomplete and has been corrected for clarity.