Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some irrelevant or incorrect words (e.g., 'I don't smoke'). Try to give a clear and direct response to the question, avoid redundancy, and keep your sentences concise and relevant. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I sometimes like shopping because I enjoy finding new things, but other times I don't like it because it can be tiring and time-consuming.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows some good ideas but lacks clarity and coherence. Avoid repeating words and unclear phrases. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly and keep your answer focused on the question.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because I want to save money. Comparing prices helps me find the best deals and avoid spending too much.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and natural. Avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Sometimes it is difficult to make choices, especially when I am tired because I need more time to decide. However, when I am happy, shopping feels easier and more enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Your answer has a good opinion but the explanation is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to support your opinion logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think expensive products are usually better than cheaper ones because cheaper items often break quickly, so you end up spending more money replacing them.

× I sometimes like shopping, sometimes I don't smoke because when I am going to the shopping sometimes I need many many time and I am getting tired.

✓ I sometimes like shopping, sometimes I don't because when I go shopping, I sometimes need a lot of time and I get tired.

The phrase 'I don't smoke' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'I don't' to mean 'I don't like it'. Also, 'when I am going to the shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'when I go shopping'. 'Many many time' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of time'. 'I am getting tired' is better as 'I get tired' to express a habitual action.

× Yeah, I I always compare prices when I am shopping because I need to save money.

✓ Yeah, I always compare prices when I shop because I need to save money.

Using 'when I am shopping' is grammatically correct but 'when I shop' is more natural and concise for habitual actions.

× I love to make some differences about money, but I don't know if I want to be rich, I don't need and I must not compare prices.

✓ I love to save some money, but I don't know if I want to be rich; I don't need to and I must not compare prices.

The phrase 'make some differences about money' is unclear; 'save some money' is more appropriate. Also, 'I don't need and I must not compare prices' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't need to and I must not compare prices' to correctly use modal verbs with 'to'.

× Sometimes yes, but especially when I am tired, I need more time than usually to make some choices.

✓ Sometimes yes, but especially when I am tired, I need more time than usual to make some choices.

'More time than usually' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'more time than usual' because 'usual' is an adjective modifying the implied noun 'time'.

× When I'm when I shop, especially when I am happy, for me it's more easy to shop.

✓ When I shop, especially when I am happy, it's easier for me to shop.

The phrase 'more easy' is incorrect; the comparative form of 'easy' is 'easier'. Also, 'for me it's more easy' is better expressed as 'it's easier for me' for natural word order.

× Yes, expensive products mostly are better than cheaper ones because if you're buying something cheaper you must need something new in 2-3 days and so you need more money than you can buy expensive product.

✓ Yes, expensive products are mostly better than cheaper ones because if you buy something cheaper, you will need a new one in 2-3 days, so you end up spending more money than if you buy an expensive product.

The phrase 'must need something new' is incorrect; 'will need a new one' is appropriate. Also, 'you need more money than you can buy expensive product' is unclear and ungrammatical; it should be 'you end up spending more money than if you buy an expensive product'. The article 'an' is needed before 'expensive product'.