Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: In your answer, try to use more natural expressions and avoid unclear or incorrect words like 'more afraid'. Also, keep your sentences clear and concise, and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like shopping because it helps me relax when I feel bored. For example, I often go to the mall to buy clothes or gifts, which makes me feel happy and refreshed.

Sugerencia: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar. Try to explain your reason more clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always compare prices between shops because money is hard to earn, so I want to save as much as possible.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Please try to give a direct answer with clear reasons and examples. Use complete sentences and avoid repeating words. Also, explain your difficulties clearly.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is difficult for me to choose when shopping because I often find many options with different colors and styles. For example, I want to buy a dress but I am not sure which color or design suits me best.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and has grammar mistakes. Try to give a full explanation with clear reasons and examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think expensive products are usually better because cheaper ones often have low quality. For example, I have bought cheap clothes before, but they wore out quickly, so I had to throw them away.

× I like going to the mall to buy clothes or gift which make me feel happier and more afraid.

✓ I like going to the mall to buy clothes or gifts which make me feel happier and less afraid.

The word 'gift' should be plural 'gifts' to match the plural 'clothes' and to indicate more than one item. Also, 'more afraid' is incorrect in this context; 'less afraid' fits better to express reduced fear or anxiety.

× When I shop I always compare the price between two shops because money is not easy to earn one thing that.

✓ When I shop, I always compare the prices at two shops because money is not easy to earn.

The phrase 'compare the price between two shops' should be 'compare the prices at two shops' to use the correct preposition and plural form. The phrase 'one thing that' is unclear and unnecessary, so it is removed for clarity.

× Yes, it's difficult for me to make joy when I shop because because outside braid and shape.

✓ Yes, it's difficult for me to enjoy shopping because of the outside brand and shape.

The original sentence is unclear and has repeated words 'because because'. 'Make joy' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'enjoy shopping'. 'Outside braid and shape' seems to be a mishearing or typo; 'outside brand and shape' makes more sense in context.

× For example, I want to buy a dress but. Assistant tell me.

✓ For example, I want to buy a dress but the assistant tells me something.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. Adding 'the assistant tells me something' completes the sentence and provides clarity.

× Yes, I think expensive products are always better than cheaper because when I buy cheaper products it has no quality.

✓ Yes, I think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because when I buy cheaper products, they have no quality.

The word 'cheaper' should be followed by 'ones' to refer to products. Also, 'it has no quality' is incorrect because 'products' is plural; it should be 'they have no quality'.

× I al I often throw it out and.

✓ I often throw them out.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains a typo 'I al I'. The corrected sentence is concise and grammatically correct, using 'them' to refer to plural products.