Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答有些重复和不够连贯，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。例如，可以先直接回答喜欢购物，然后说明喜欢线上购物和实体店购物的原因。

Ejemplo: Yes, I like shopping very much. I usually prefer buying online because it is convenient and offers more choices. However, I also enjoy going to physical stores to see and compare products in person.

Sugerencia: 回答中有些语法和表达不够准确，建议直接说明比较价格的原因，并用连接词连接句子，使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually compare prices when I shop because I want to find comfortable and good-quality products. However, if I really like something, I might not compare prices carefully.

Sugerencia: 回答表达不够清晰，建议先直接回答是否难以做选择，然后用具体理由支持观点，避免重复和语法错误。

Ejemplo: It is difficult for me to choose gifts for my parents or others because I want to make them happy. However, when I shop for myself, it is easier since I know what I want and consider the price.

Sugerencia: 回答不完整且表达混乱，建议先明确表达观点，然后用具体理由支持，避免语法错误和不连贯。

Ejemplo: I used to think expensive products are better, but now I believe both expensive and cheap products can be good. Sometimes expensive items have better quality or brand reputation, but cheaper ones can also be useful and affordable.

× If I got something what I really want to buy, I will choose online to buy it or go to the shop, buy food to buy it.

✓ If I get something that I really want to buy, I will choose to buy it online or go to the shop to buy it.

The sentence uses 'got' which is the past tense, but the conditional sentence requires the present tense 'get' to express a real possibility. Also, 'what' should be 'that' to correctly introduce the relative clause. The phrase 'choose online to buy it' is awkward; it should be 'choose to buy it online'. The phrase 'buy food to buy it' is unclear and corrected to 'go to the shop to buy it' for clarity.

× If I got something what I really want to buy, I will choose online to buy it or go to the shop, buy food to buy it.

✓ If I get something that I really want to buy, I will choose to buy it online or go to the shop to buy it.

The relative pronoun 'what' is incorrectly used; it should be 'that' to introduce the object clause properly.

× Because I think online to buy something can make a lot of difference.

✓ Because I think buying something online can make a lot of difference.

The phrase 'online to buy something' is incorrect. The correct form is 'buying something online' to express the action properly.

× But go to the shop, it can come compare the best, the best things.

✓ But going to the shop allows me to compare the best things.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Go to the shop' should be 'going to the shop' to function as a subject. 'It can come compare' is incorrect; it should be 'allows me to compare'. The phrase 'the best, the best things' is redundant and simplified to 'the best things'.

× When I'm in shop, I usually compare prices because I want to buy the really, you know, the really comfortable things to me.

✓ When I'm in the shop, I usually compare prices because I want to buy things that are really comfortable for me.

The phrase 'in shop' is missing the article 'the'. Also, 'comfortable things to me' should be 'comfortable for me' to use the correct preposition.

× But sometimes I'm not because unless I really want to buy these things at that time.

✓ But sometimes I don't because I only compare prices if I really want to buy these things at that time.

The original sentence is confusing and incomplete. 'I'm not' is unclear; it should specify what is not done. 'Because unless' is contradictory; 'only if' or 'if' is more appropriate to express the condition.

× If I buy it, which for my parents or other people I think it's difficult because I just want to try make them happy or make them enjoy enjoy it.

✓ If I buy it for my parents or other people, I think it's difficult because I just want to try to make them happy or help them enjoy it.

The phrase 'which for my parents or other people' is incorrect; it should be 'for my parents or other people'. 'Try make' should be 'try to make'. Repetition of 'enjoy' is unnecessary.

× But if it if it only for me, I think it is because I know what I really want to buy.

✓ But if it is only for me, I think it is easier because I know what I really want to buy.

The phrase 'if it if it only for me' has a repeated 'if it'. Also, the sentence lacks clarity; adding 'easier' clarifies the meaning.

× I know they decide the price.

✓ I know I decide the price.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrect here; the speaker is referring to themselves, so 'I' is appropriate.

× Questionable, I think yes before but right now my idea was change.

✓ Questionable. I used to think yes, but right now my idea has changed.

The original sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. 'I think yes before' should be 'I used to think yes'. 'My idea was change' should be 'my idea has changed' to use the correct tense and form.

× I think both because maybe the expensive product seller was the famous person, maybe the expensive products and have a good appearance.

✓ I think both because maybe the expensive product seller is a famous person, and maybe the expensive products have a good appearance.

The sentence has pronoun and verb agreement issues. 'Seller was the famous person' should be 'seller is a famous person'. 'Products and have' is incorrect; it should be 'products have'.

× I think if they are in the same.

✓ I think if they are the same.

The phrase 'in the same' is incorrect; it should be 'the same' to complete the comparison.