Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is quite long and a bit unclear. Try to keep your response natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then adding specific details. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'the main source that I shop is close' and 'I like to hear new fashionable clothes'. Also, use correct vocabulary such as 'clothes' instead of 'close'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially for clothes because I like to stay fashionable. For example, my favorite brand is Loflo's Polo, and I often buy their latest collections.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question and explain your reason clearly. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas logically. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'price player crucial role' and incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always compare prices because sometimes expensive items do not guarantee better quality. So, I want to make sure I get good value for my money.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly whether it is difficult or not, then explain with specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'also' to make your answer coherent. Avoid repeating phrases and incorrect grammar.

Ejemplo: Yes, I find it difficult to choose sometimes because I often ask my friends for advice. Also, my parents influence my shopping decisions.

Sugerencia: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, correct phrases like 'if we spend a few money' to 'if we spend more money'.

Ejemplo: I believe expensive products are usually better because they tend to have higher quality. For example, when I buy clothes, I prefer expensive brands because they last longer.

× Yes, I like shopping a lot and apart from this the main source that I shop is close and I'm also fashionable person and that's why I like to hear new fashionable clothes and apart from this my favorite brand of clothes is Loflo's Polo and I like to buy that clothes.

✓ Yes, I like shopping a lot and apart from this the main source that I shop is clothes and I'm also a fashionable person and that's why I like to wear new fashionable clothes and apart from this my favorite brand of clothes is Loflo's Polo and I like to buy those clothes.

The word 'close' is incorrect and should be 'clothes' (plural). 'I'm also fashionable person' lacks the article 'a' before 'fashionable person'. 'I like to hear new fashionable clothes' is incorrect; 'hear' should be 'wear'. 'That clothes' is incorrect; 'clothes' is plural and should be preceded by 'those' instead of 'that'. These corrections address singular/plural issues and article usage.

× Well, when I do any shopping, firstly I see the price of that material because if the price is very expensive then quality is also average.

✓ Well, when I do any shopping, firstly I look at the price of that material because if the price is very expensive then the quality is also average.

The phrase 'see the price of that material' is unnatural; 'look at the price' is the correct collocation. Also, 'quality is also average' needs 'the' before 'quality' to specify it. This correction improves preposition and article usage.

× And apart from this price player crucial role in the shopping if we are able to buy that shop the shop.

✓ And apart from this, price plays a crucial role in shopping if we are able to buy from that shop.

'Price player' is incorrect; it should be 'price plays'. 'The shopping' is better as 'shopping' without 'the'. 'Buy that shop the shop' is unclear; corrected to 'buy from that shop'. These corrections fix singular/plural and sentence structure issues.

× Well it is a many difficult to me to shop any particular thing but when I do shopping firstly my first reference is my friend and I went with my friend to do any shopping and apart from this my parents also influenced me about shop.

✓ Well, it is very difficult for me to shop for any particular thing but when I do shopping, firstly my first reference is my friend and I go with my friend to do any shopping and apart from this my parents also influence me about shopping.

'A many difficult' is incorrect; 'very difficult' is correct. 'To me' should be 'for me'. 'I went' should be 'I go' to maintain present tense. 'Influenced me about shop' should be 'influence me about shopping'. These corrections address singular/plural, tense, and preposition issues.

× Well, I am the person who would like to wear expensive clothes and that's why I think expensive things are better than the cheaper ones because expensive, uh, expensive things are in good quality.

✓ Well, I am the person who likes to wear expensive clothes and that's why I think expensive things are better than the cheaper ones because expensive things are of good quality.

'Would like to wear' is acceptable but 'likes to wear' fits better here as a habitual action. 'Are in good quality' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'are of good quality'. This correction improves modal verb usage and preposition use.

× And if we spend a few money on any product, then the also answer is also good.

✓ And if we spend a little money on any product, then the answer is also good.

'A few money' is incorrect because 'money' is uncountable; 'a little money' is correct. 'The also answer' is incorrect; it should be 'the answer'. These corrections fix quantifier and article usage.