Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo matra ma 'uh' ra 'um' jasto filler shabda haru cha, jasle kura prabhavit rup ma prastut garna garo banauchha. Tapai le prashna ko pratyaksha uttar dinu parcha ra spashta ra sankshep ma kura garnu parcha. English ma, 'I like shopping but I am selective. I prefer shopping online rather than going to the market because it helps me avoid confusion about what to buy.' jasto spashta ra prabhavit uttar dinu ramro hunchha.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like shopping, but I am quite selective. I prefer shopping online rather than going to the market because it helps me avoid confusion about what to buy.

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma 'uh' jasto filler shabda haru dherai chan, jasle kura prabhavit rup ma prastut garna garo banauchha. Tapai le prashna ko pratyaksha uttar dinu parcha ra spashta ra sankshep ma kura garnu parcha. English ma, 'Yes, I compare prices when I shop because I come from a middle-class family and need to find affordable options.' jasto spashta ra prabhavit uttar dinu ramro hunchha.

Ejemplo: Yes, I compare prices when I shop because I come from a middle-class family and need to find affordable options.

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma thulo galti cha, jasle kura bujhna garo banauchha. Tapai le prashna ko pratyaksha uttar dinu parcha ra spashta ra sankshep ma kura garnu parcha. English ma, 'Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices when I shop. For example, last Sunday I wanted to buy a pair of shoes but I was confused about which one to choose.' jasto spashta ra sankshep uttar dinu ramro hunchha.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices when I shop. For example, last Sunday I wanted to buy a pair of shoes but I was confused about which one to choose.

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra clarity ko kami cha. Tapai le prashna ko pratyaksha uttar dinu parcha ra spashta ra sankshep ma kura garnu parcha. English ma, 'Yes, I think expensive products are usually better than cheaper ones because they often have higher quality.' jasto spashta ra prabhavit uttar dinu ramro hunchha.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think expensive products are usually better than cheaper ones because they often have higher quality.

× Uh, yes, I do shopping, uh, but uh, I'm so selective.

✓ Uh, yes, I do shopping, uh, but uh, I'm very selective.

The original sentence uses 'so selective' which is grammatically acceptable but 'very selective' is more natural and clear in this context. No major grammar error here, but improving adjective usage enhances clarity.

× I prefer on shopping rather than going to market in Portage.

✓ I prefer shopping rather than going to the market in Portage.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'prefer'. The correct form is 'prefer shopping'. Also, 'the market' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× Uh, that makes me not to be confused what to buy and what not to, uh, just, uh, sitting in our home in, uh, sitting in our room in order.

✓ That helps me not to be confused about what to buy and what not to; I just sit in our home, in our room, in order.

The sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'Makes me not to be confused' should be 'helps me not to be confused'. Also, 'confused what to buy' needs 'about' after 'confused'. The phrase 'sitting in our home in, uh, sitting in our room in order' is unclear and rephrased for clarity.

× Uh, yes, I used to compare, uh, prices, uh, when I, I do shopping, uh, because uh, uh, we are middle class people, we have to look for cheaper one, not expensive.

✓ Uh, yes, I used to compare prices when I did shopping because we are middle-class people; we have to look for the cheaper one, not the expensive one.

The phrase 'when I, I do shopping' mixes present and past tense; it should be 'when I did shopping' to match 'used to'. Also, 'cheaper one' and 'expensive' need articles: 'the cheaper one' and 'the expensive one'.

× So I used to compute prices.

✓ So I used to compare prices.

The verb 'compute' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'compare' when talking about checking prices to find cheaper options.

× Yes, it make me so difficult to choose what to buy while going.

✓ Yes, it makes me so difficult to choose what to buy while going.

The subject 'it' requires the verb 'makes' in third person singular form, not 'make'.

× I sometimes used to go market while going there I become so confused what to buy.

✓ I sometimes used to go to the market; while going there, I became so confused about what to buy.

'Go market' needs the preposition 'to' and the article 'the'. 'Become' should be past tense 'became' to match 'used to'. Also, 'confused what to buy' requires 'about' after 'confused'.

× For example last Sunday I have want to buy a pair of shoes but I become little bit confused to buy which one.

✓ For example, last Sunday I wanted to buy a pair of shoes but I became a little bit confused about which one to buy.

'Have want' is incorrect; it should be 'wanted' in past tense. 'Become' should be 'became' in past tense. 'Confused to buy which one' should be 'confused about which one to buy'.

× Exactly. Yes, uh, expensive. Expensive products are always better than cheaper one because cheaper one may not have the same good quality that may have the expensive one that you argue on you.

✓ Exactly. Yes, expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because cheaper ones may not have the same good quality that expensive ones have.

'Cheaper one' and 'expensive one' should be plural 'cheaper ones' and 'expensive ones' to match 'products'. The phrase 'that you argue on you' is unclear and removed for clarity.