Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevabınız doğal ve anlamlı, ancak daha etkili olması için neden alışverişin stres atmaya yardımcı olduğunu biraz daha detaylandırabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, cümlenizi 2-3 cümle ile sınırlayarak daha öz ve net yapabilirsiniz.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like shopping because it helps me relax after a busy day. For example, browsing through different stores distracts me from stress and makes me feel happier.

Sugerencia: Cevabınızda anlam karışıklığı ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha açık ve doğrudan cevap vermeniz gerekiyor. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla bağlamalısınız.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always compare prices because I am a student and need to manage my budget carefully. Since I rely on my parents' support, I want to spend money wisely.

Sugerencia: Cümleniz biraz karışık ve uzun. Daha net ve akıcı bir şekilde ifade etmeye çalışın. Ayrıca, bağlaçlar kullanarak düşüncelerinizi daha iyi bağlayabilirsiniz.

Ejemplo: At first, I thought making choices was easy for me. However, now I realize it's difficult because there are many options and different prices to consider.

Sugerencia: Cevabınızda fikirlerinizi daha açık ve net ifade edin. Ayrıca, cümle yapınızı basitleştirip, bağlaçlar kullanarak daha akıcı hale getirebilirsiniz.

Ejemplo: I don't think expensive products are always better. It depends on the type and quality of the product, not just the price.

× Because I'm so rich I have to compare prices when I shop because I'm a student and I live for not for off of my parents money off and I live off my parents money.

✓ Because I'm not rich, I have to compare prices when I shop because I'm a student and I live off my parents' money.

The original sentence misuses prepositions 'for not for off of' which is incorrect. The correct preposition to indicate living on someone's money is 'live off'. Also, 'parents money' should be possessive as 'parents' money'. The phrase 'Because I'm so rich' contradicts the context, so it should be 'Because I'm not rich'.

× Because I'm so rich I have to compare prices when I shop because I'm a student and I live for not for off of my parents money off and I live off my parents money.

✓ Because I'm not rich, I have to compare prices when I shop because I'm a student and I live off my parents' money.

The phrase 'parents money' lacks the possessive apostrophe. It should be 'parents' money' to indicate money belonging to the parents.

× Until recent I was sure that it is not for me to make choice but now I know for 100% that I am the one who cannot easily choose what he needs while doing shopping because of the great variety of choices and prices.

✓ Until recently, I was sure that it was not for me to make choices but now I know for 100% that I am the one who cannot easily choose what he needs while shopping because of the great variety of choices and prices.

The word 'recent' should be 'recently' as an adverb. 'It is not for me to make choice' should be 'it was not for me to make choices' to maintain past tense and plural form. 'Doing shopping' is better expressed as 'shopping'.

× Until recent I was sure that it is not for me to make choice but now I know for 100% that I am the one who cannot easily choose what he needs while doing shopping because of the great variety of choices and prices.

✓ Until recently, I was sure that it was not for me to make choices but now I know for 100% that I am the one who cannot easily choose what he needs while shopping because of the great variety of choices and prices.

The word 'choice' should be plural 'choices' because it refers to multiple options.

× Not exactly. I can neither agree or disagree with this point because it fully depends on type of products that is bought by consumers and the quality or whether there are usable depends not simply on the price.

✓ Not exactly. I can neither agree nor disagree with this point because it fully depends on the type of products that are bought by consumers and the quality or whether they are usable does not simply depend on the price.

The phrase 'neither agree or disagree' should be 'neither agree nor disagree' as the correct correlative conjunction pair is 'neither...nor'. Also, 'type of products that is bought' should be 'type of products that are bought' to agree in number. 'Whether there are usable' is incorrect; it should be 'whether they are usable'. The verb agreement in 'depends not simply on the price' is corrected to 'does not simply depend on the price'.