Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, "It help me" nên là "It helps me". Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy shopping, especially when I go with my friends on weekends. It helps me reduce stress and feel relaxed after a long day. Usually, I buy shoes or clothes because I like updating my wardrobe.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, "compare the price" nên là "compare prices" và "high quality of products" nên là "high-quality products". Thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn cũng rất cần thiết.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually compare prices of different products when I shop because it helps me save money and buy high-quality products.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng. Ví dụ, "it's is" nên là "it is" hoặc "it's", "make good choice" nên là "make a good choice", và "it like the design" nên là "I don't like the design". Bạn cũng nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Sometimes, it is difficult for me to make a good choice when shopping because even if an item has a good price, I might not be satisfied with its color or style. For example, I may like the quality, but I don't like the design.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần chú ý đến số nhiều và số ít trong câu, ví dụ "expensive products" và "cheaper ones". Ngoài ra, câu "cheap product on the web with high quality" nên được diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn cũng rất quan trọng.

Ejemplo: No, I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because I often buy cheap products online that have high quality.

× It help me reduce stress and feel relaxed after a long day.

✓ It helps me reduce stress and feel relaxed after a long day.

The subject 'It' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'helps' to agree in number and person. The original sentence uses 'help' which is incorrect for third person singular subjects.

× I usually compare the price of different products when I shop because I can save money and can buy high quality of products.

✓ I usually compare the prices of different products when I shop because I can save money and can buy high-quality products.

The noun 'price' should be plural 'prices' because it refers to multiple products. Also, 'high quality of products' is incorrect; it should be 'high-quality products' as an adjective-noun phrase without 'of'.

× When I shop, it's is sometimes difficult for me to make good choice because although an item has a good price, I'm not satisfied with its color or style.

✓ When I shop, it is sometimes difficult for me to make a good choice because although an item has a good price, I'm not satisfied with its color or style.

The phrase 'make good choice' is incorrect; it should be 'make a good choice' because 'choice' is a countable noun and requires an article here.

× For example, I might like the quality, but it like the design.

✓ For example, I might like the quality, but I don't like the design.

The subject 'it' is incorrect when referring to the speaker's preference; it should be 'I'. Also, the verb 'like' needs to be negated to express contrast properly.

× No, I don't think the expensive products are always better than cheaper one because I often buy cheap product on the web with high quality.

✓ No, I don't think the expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because I often buy cheap products on the web with high quality.

The word 'one' should be plural 'ones' to match 'products'. Also, 'cheap product' should be plural 'cheap products' to be consistent and grammatically correct.