Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat natural but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'in boost my MO'. Try to use clearer expressions and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it refreshes my mind and boosts my mood. It feels like a relaxing break from my daily routine.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and could be more specific. Use plural forms correctly and explain what 'benefits' means. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because it helps me save money. This way, I can spend the extra money on other important things.

Sugerencia: Your answer is honest but could be clearer and more structured. Avoid informal phrases like 'wishy washy' without explanation. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details.

Ejemplo: Yes, I find it difficult to make choices when shopping because I am indecisive. Therefore, I usually ask my sister for advice and discuss options with her before deciding.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion, and use linking words for coherence.

Ejemplo: I believe expensive products are often better because they usually have better design and higher quality materials. For example, a costly jacket might last longer and look more stylish than a cheaper one.

× Yes shopping is my cup of tea because when I buy something it's refresh my mind and I also in boost my MO.

✓ Yes, shopping is my cup of tea because when I buy something it refreshes my mind and also boosts my MO.

The verb 'refresh' and 'boost' need to be in the third person singular present tense form 'refreshes' and 'boosts' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'in boost' is incorrect; it should be 'boosts'.

× I always compare price when I do shopping because I want to get benefits from it and I can allocate my money for the other things.

✓ I always compare prices when I do shopping because I want to get benefits from it and I can allocate my money for other things.

The noun 'price' should be plural 'prices' because you compare multiple prices. Also, 'the other things' is incorrect here; it should be 'other things' without 'the' because it refers to things in general.

× Yes I am because I am a wishy washy person. That's why when I want to buy something I always invite my sister to make a decision for me and I can discuss it too.

✓ Yes, I am because I am a wishy-washy person. That's why when I want to buy something, I always invite my sister to make a decision for me and discuss it with her too.

The phrase 'I can discuss it too' is awkward and unclear. It is better to say 'discuss it with her too' to clarify the object of discussion. Also, 'wishy washy' should be hyphenated as 'wishy-washy'. Commas are added for clarity.

× Absolutely yes, because firstly the expensive product, they have the good design and also the good colors. Not only that, the expensive product has quality, best quality and it I can wear it for.

✓ Absolutely yes, because firstly, expensive products have good design and also good colors. Not only that, expensive products have quality, the best quality, and I can wear them for a long time.

The subject 'product' should be plural 'products' to agree with the plural pronoun 'they'. Also, 'the good design' and 'the good colors' should be 'good design' and 'good colors' without 'the'. The phrase 'it I can wear it for' is incorrect and unclear; it is corrected to 'I can wear them for a long time' to make sense.