Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Gereksiz tekrar ve dolgu kelimelerden kaçının. Cümlenizi doğrudan ve net kurun, örneğin alışveriş yaparken neyi sevdiğinizi açıkça belirtin.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially when I can see and touch the clothes I want to buy. It makes the experience more exciting and enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Cümlenizi daha net ve tamamlanmış şekilde kurmalısınız. Gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu kelimeleri azaltın. Ayrıca, neden fiyat karşılaştırması yaptığınızı açık ve mantıklı bir şekilde ifade edin.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always compare prices because living in Turkey, where the economy is challenging, means that many products are expensive. So, I try to find the best deals to save money.

Sugerencia: Cümlenizi daha kısa ve net yapmalısınız. Gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu kelimeleri azaltın. Ayrıca, neden kararsız olduğunuzu ve bu durumun sizi nasıl etkilediğini açıkça belirtin.

Ejemplo: Yes, I find it difficult to make choices because I am indecisive. Looking at many options confuses me, so I often struggle to decide what to buy.

Sugerencia: Cümlenizi daha akıcı ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla destekleyin. Gereksiz dolgu kelimeleri azaltın ve fikirlerinizi daha açık ve spesifik örneklerle destekleyin.

Ejemplo: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. For example, items sold at bazaars are usually cheaper than in stores, but they can still be of good quality and worth buying.

× Yes, I do like shopping, especially going to store and touching the things uh, I would like to wear.

✓ Yes, I do like shopping, especially going to stores and touching the things, uh, I would like to wear.

The word 'store' should be plural 'stores' because it refers to shopping in general, which involves multiple stores. Using the singular form here is incorrect when talking about a general activity.

× Makes shopping small, uh, exciting and more great.

✓ It makes shopping small, uh, exciting and better.

The phrase 'more great' is incorrect; the correct comparative form is 'better'. Also, the sentence lacks a subject; adding 'It' clarifies the meaning.

× Yes uh, I have to compare the prices because of I live in uh, Turkey, which is, which has a poor economy and in my country everything is so expensive so that uh, I have to compare the prices in order to uh, buy the.

✓ Yes, uh, I have to compare the prices because I live in, uh, Turkey, which has a poor economy, and in my country everything is so expensive that, uh, I have to compare the prices in order to, uh, buy them.

The phrase 'because of I live' is incorrect; it should be 'because I live'. Also, 'so that' is better replaced with 'that' in this context. The sentence was incomplete at the end; 'buy the' should be 'buy them' to refer to items.

× Yes, unfortunately I, I am an in indecisive person so I cannot choose uh, the items that I would like to buy and I am trying to uh see all of the options and looking at a lot of options always confuse me so I cannot.

✓ Yes, unfortunately, I am an indecisive person, so I cannot choose, uh, the items that I would like to buy. I try to, uh, see all of the options, and looking at a lot of options always confuses me, so I cannot.

The phrase 'in indecisive' is incorrect; it should be 'an indecisive'. Also, 'trying to see' and 'looking at' should be parallel in tense and structure. 'Confuse' should be 'confuses' to agree with the singular subject 'looking at a lot of options'.

× No, I don't agree with this statement because, uh, when you go to bazaar and look at the items that always, uh, cheaper than stores, but sometimes that can be quite, uh, good quality and you can also buy them.

✓ No, I don't agree with this statement because, uh, when you go to bazaars and look at the items that are always, uh, cheaper than in stores, sometimes they can be quite, uh, good quality and you can also buy them.

The word 'bazaar' should be plural 'bazaars' to indicate general places. The sentence was missing the verb 'are' in 'items that are always cheaper'. Also, 'that' referring to items should be 'they' to match plural subject.