Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant with good content and personal detail. To improve, make your response more concise and natural by using a single clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting details. Avoid repeating words (e.g., “enjoy”) and check small grammar points (use present simple: “I enjoy buying”). Aim for 2–4 sentences and add a linking phrase if needed.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping. I particularly like buying clothes and trying them on to see how they fit, because discovering new styles helps me refresh my wardrobe.

Sugerencia: The main idea is there, but pronunciation/word choice and grammar errors make the answer hard to follow (e.g., “pride” should be “price”, awkward phrasing). Improve clarity by using correct vocabulary, removing fillers, and structuring the response: topic sentence + reason + brief example. Use linking words like “because” or “so”.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually compare prices online because different shops often have discounts. For example, I once saved 20% by checking three websites before buying a jacket.

Sugerencia: The answer communicates indecisiveness but has several grammar and coherence issues (wrong tense/form: “I'm earned indecisive persons”; unclear pronouns). Make a clear topic sentence, give a specific reason, and one short example of a solution. Avoid long hesitations and correct subject-verb agreement.

Ejemplo: Yes, I find it difficult to decide, especially when shopping online, because many items look similar. For instance, I often hesitate between the basic and premium version, and I usually choose the upgraded one if the price difference is small.

Sugerencia: Good opinion and reasoning, but grammar and vocabulary need refining (e.g., “it doesn't depend on the price” not “it depends on the expensive”). Make the response more concise: state your opinion, give one clear reason and a short example or advice. Reduce fillers like “um” and “uh”.

Ejemplo: No, I don't think expensive items are always better. It depends on quality and features; for example, a mid-range phone may have all the functions I need, so I test reviews and compare features before deciding.

× I have noticed that I spend quite a lot of money on shopping nowadays, so I would say I really enjoy it.

✓ I have noticed that I spend quite a lot of money on shopping nowadays, so I would say I really enjoy it.

No change needed. The present perfect ('have noticed') and present simple ('spend') are appropriate together to describe a current habit and recent awareness.

× I especially like buying new clothes and trying them on to see how they look and I enjoy discovering different styles and trends.

✓ I especially like buying new clothes and trying them on to see how they look, and I enjoy discovering different styles and trends.

Comma needed before the conjunction 'and' to separate two independent clauses; this is punctuation rather than a grammatical preposition error, but it improves sentence clarity. No preposition change required otherwise.

× Yes, I often compare the pride between shop through online.

✓ Yes, I often compare the prices between shops online.

Problems: 'pride' should be 'prices' (wrong word), 'shop' should be plural 'shops' to match 'between', and 'through online' is incorrect—use 'online' after the verb. Use 'between shops' when comparing two or more shops.

× So when you compare the price umm uh, from different shop with the same item, you can umm, reduce your expenses on that item that oh, some store offer the discount, so it probably you.

✓ So when you compare the price of the same item from different shops, you can reduce your expenses because some stores offer discounts.

Errors: word order and articles—use 'price of the same item' and plural 'shops'. Remove filler words and fix verb form 'offer' stays present simple for habitual fact. 'so it probably you' was unclear; replaced with clear causal clause 'because some stores offer discounts'.

× Yes, definitely, because I'm earned indecisive persons, so it's hard for me to make decision choosing the item that I shop online umm especially even as a the for the same item.

✓ Yes, definitely, because I'm an indecisive person, so it's hard for me to make decisions when choosing an item to buy online, especially if it's the same item.

Multiple issues corrected: 'I'm earned indecisive persons' is wrong—use 'I'm an indecisive person' (singular). 'make decision' -> 'make decisions' (plural or 'make a decision'). 'choosing the item that I shop online' -> 'when choosing an item to buy online'. Clarified 'especially if it's the same item' for meaning.

× But if they just add like a little more money, you will got like the higher version of it.

✓ But if you add a little more money, you will get a higher version of it.

Use correct conditional structure: 'if you add' (present simple) with future 'you will get'. 'will got' is wrong—use 'will get'. Remove filler 'like' and extra articles for clarity.

× I will.

✓ I will.

As a standalone fragment this is acceptable in conversation as a short answer meaning 'I will do that.' No grammatical change required.

× Umm, I don't agree with this statement.

✓ Umm, I don't agree with this statement.

Sentence is grammatically correct for expressing disagreement in the present tense; no change needed.

× Uh, I believe that it's not depend on the expensive of the product, but it depends on the quality that you try it.

✓ Uh, I believe that it doesn't depend on the price of the product, but on the quality when you try it.

Use correct verb form 'doesn't depend' for negative present. 'the expensive of the product' is wrong—use 'the price of the product'. 'depends on the quality that you try it' is awkward; use 'depends on the quality when you try it' or 'depends on the product's quality'.

× So before you buy, you should uh, try the feature of that product first before buying, not focusing on the expense.

✓ So before you buy, you should try the features of the product first, not focus on the price.

Use plural 'features' for product attributes and remove redundant 'before buying'. 'Not focusing on the expense' is awkward—use 'not focus on the price'. Also keep modal 'should' + base verb 'try'.