Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: give a clear topic sentence, then one supporting detail. Correct grammar (use plurals, articles, and correct verb forms) and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping. I usually go to the mall once a week for clothes and household items, and I also browse online once or twice a day for special deals.

Sugerencia: Make your meaning clear and use correct sentence structure. Start with a direct answer, then explain with specific details and linking words. Use correct vocabulary (e.g. "price comparison apps" or "compare prices") and correct tense and articles.

Ejemplo: It depends. When I shop online, I usually use price-comparison apps to check other retailers for better deals; however, at the mall I tend not to compare because the price is fixed and I want to buy immediately.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and improve grammar and cohesion. State the reason briefly and give a specific example or strategy you use (linking with 'because' or 'so'). Avoid vague phrases like 'everyone opinion.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I often find it hard to choose when there are several options because I worry about making the wrong decision, so I usually ask a friend or read reviews online before buying.

Sugerencia: Provide a more balanced and clearly expressed opinion. Start with your direct stance, then give a specific reason and, if possible, a counterpoint. Use clear vocabulary (e.g. 'lasting', 'higher quality') and correct grammar.

Ejemplo: I tend to think expensive products are often better because they usually use higher-quality materials and last longer; however, this is not always true—sometimes cheaper items offer good value, especially for short-term use.

× Yes I do. I often go shopping once a week at a mall and I spend one or twice a day shopping online.

✓ Yes, I do. I often go shopping once a week at a mall, and I spend time shopping online once or twice a day.

Problems: incorrect adverbial phrase order and missing comma. 'one or twice a day' is ungrammatical — use 'once or twice a day'. Also add comma before coordinating conjunction joining independent clauses. Suggestion: place frequency expression after the verb phrase ('spend time shopping online once or twice a day') and include commas for clarity.

× It depends, if I shopping online I usually get the other app to shake the paste but if I go to the mall it is one price that show me so I don't compare it.

✓ It depends. If I am shopping online, I usually use another app to check the price, but if I go to the mall there is one price shown to me so I don't compare it.

Multiple errors: missing auxiliary with -ing form (should be 'am shopping' — present continuous). 'get the other app to shake the paste' is likely incorrect vocabulary; replaced with 'use another app to check the price'. Subject-verb agreement and passive construction: 'it is one price that show me' should be 'there is one price shown to me' or 'one price is shown to me'. Also split into two sentences/clauses with proper commas.

× Yes, for me it is kind of difficult to decide if I have more than one choice, so I need or get an everyone opinion to make a choice when I shopping.

✓ Yes, for me it is kind of difficult to decide when I have more than one option, so I need to get everyone's opinion to make a choice when I am shopping.

Errors: 'when I shopping' needs auxiliary: 'when I am shopping' (present continuous). 'more than one choice' is acceptable but 'option' is more natural. 'need or get an everyone opinion' is ungrammatical; correct is 'need to get everyone's opinion'. Also possessive 'everyone's' required.

× Yes I do. The most open safe item is have a long lifetime to use. This is my experience so I believe in this.

✓ Yes, I do. The most expensive or safest items tend to have a long lifespan. This is my experience, so I believe that.

Original sentence has incorrect word choices and grammar: 'most open safe' is nonsensical — likely meant 'most expensive' or 'safest'. 'is have a long lifetime to use' mixes verb forms; correct structure: 'tend to have a long lifespan' or 'have a long lifetime'. Added 'that' for the final clause. Also added commas for readability and adjusted noun choice ('lifespan' or 'lifetime').