Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为完整且自然，但可以更简洁，避免冗余。建议开头直接回答身份，然后简要说明工作内容。

例: I am a finance lecturer at a local university, where I teach undergraduates and conduct research in financial management.

提案: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但可以使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I work at a small university in my hometown, which is located in the southwest of Zhejiang province and specializes in finance and accounting.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但语法错误影响表达效果。建议注意单复数和词汇准确性，同时可以补充更多细节。

例: Actually, I don't find it very comfortable to work there because some staff in the administrative departments are often unfriendly to lecturers and professors.

提案: 回答较好，表达了原因，但可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Despite some issues with people, I like working here because the university is small and well equipped with advanced computers and other technical devices.

提案: 回答清晰且内容具体，可以增加连接词使表达更自然。

例: In the future, I plan to complete my current work at the university and then prepare for further education abroad to advance my career.

× Actually, I don't find it a very comfortable place to work because some stuff in the administrative departments are often unfriendly to lecturers and professors.

✓ Actually, I don't find it a very comfortable place to work because some staff in the administrative departments is often unfriendly to lecturers and professors.

这里'stuff'是不可数名词，表示员工时应使用'staff'，且作为整体时谓语动词用单数形式'is'。原句中'stuff'错误且谓语动词与主语不一致，需改为'staff is'。