Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly unclear due to the phrase 'with our stream'. Try to be more concise and clear by directly stating your current status and future plans. Also, avoid unnecessary details that do not directly answer the question.

例: I am currently a student who has just finished senior secondary school. I plan to study abroad to gain international experience and enhance my skills.

提案: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question. To improve, you can add a linking word to connect your ideas smoothly and make the response more natural.

例: I am currently not working because I am a full-time student; therefore, I want to complete my education before looking for a job.

提案: Your answer is repetitive and does not directly address the question. Even if you are not working, you can answer hypothetically or explain why you cannot comment. Try to provide a more complete and natural response.

例: Since I am not working at the moment, I cannot say much about any workplace. However, I believe a good workplace should have a friendly environment and opportunities for growth.

提案: Your answer is too short and does not provide any explanation. Even if you do not like the place, you should explain why to make your answer more natural and effective.

例: I do not like the place where I work because it lacks good facilities and the environment is not very supportive.

提案: Your answer contains some grammatical errors and is a bit unclear. Try to use correct verb forms and structure your answer with linking words to make it coherent and natural.

例: Currently, I am planning to go abroad for higher studies. After that, I will look for a job and settle there; otherwise, I will return to my home country.

× Currently I'm planning to going abroad for my higher studies.

✓ Currently I'm planning to go abroad for my higher studies.

The verb 'plan' is followed by the infinitive form 'to go', not the gerund 'going'. Using 'to going' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'planning to go'. This is a common error with verb + -ing form usage.

× After that I will looking for I will look for a job and settle there or otherwise I will come back.

✓ After that I will look for a job and settle there or otherwise I will come back.

The future tense with 'will' requires the base form of the verb, so 'will looking' is incorrect. It should be 'will look'. Also, the phrase 'I will looking for I will look for' is redundant and incorrect. The correct sentence uses 'will look' only once.