Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些语法错误，表达不够自然。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并且避免重复和多余的词汇。可以先说明你工作，然后简要说明工作内容和感受。

例: I work at an institution where I teach students the Chinese language. It is very rewarding to see my students achieve their learning goals.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用完整句子，明确说明工作地点，并且用连词使句子更连贯。避免重复之前的内容。

例: I work at an institution located in the city center. Many students like our institution because we have professional teachers and good teaching methods.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体细节支持观点，使用连词使表达更流畅。

例: Although we sometimes have minor disagreements, I enjoy the friendly atmosphere at work. My colleagues are helpful and often share professional materials with me.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和不相关的词汇（如“Sarkozy”），表达不自然。建议直接回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并避免使用无关词汇。

例: Yes, I like my workplace because my colleagues are very helpful and friendly. We cooperate well and have a good relationship.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不完整。建议先明确说明未来计划，然后用具体细节支持，避免重复和不完整的句子。

例: I don't have a fixed plan yet, but after my IELTS test, I want to continue teaching. In the future, I hope to find a job that can earn me a good income.

× Umm, working in an institution and many teach students about Chinese language.

✓ Umm, I am working in an institution and teaching many students about the Chinese language.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper verb forms, causing sentence structure errors. Adding 'I am' clarifies the subject and verb, and 'teaching' correctly expresses the ongoing action. Also, 'the Chinese language' is the correct form.

× I'm working at institution which is in the center of this city.

✓ I'm working at an institution which is in the center of this city.

The noun 'institution' requires an article. Since it is mentioned for the first time and is not specific, the indefinite article 'an' should be used.

× many students love our institution because our professional.

✓ Many students love our institution because our staff are professional.

The original sentence uses 'professional' incorrectly as an adjective without a noun. Adding 'staff are' clarifies the meaning and corrects the adjective usage.

× Sometimes our minor is not so that emotional we would like to handle problems with each other.

✓ Sometimes our manager is not very emotional; we would like to handle problems with each other.

The word 'minor' is likely a misused word for 'manager'. Also, 'not so that emotional' is incorrect; 'not very emotional' is the correct form. The sentence structure is improved by separating ideas with a semicolon.

× I always helpful their friend name and provides me with a professional materials in my work.

✓ My colleagues are always helpful and provide me with professional materials for my work.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and verbs. 'I always helpful their friend name' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Rewriting clarifies the subject and verb agreement and corrects pronoun use.

× Yes, I like the place where I walk because my colleagues are so helpful and we always cooperate with each other.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I work because my colleagues are so helpful and we always cooperate with each other.

The word 'walk' is a typo or incorrect word choice; it should be 'work' to match the context of the question about the workplace.

× Umm, they are so friendly and we always tell our secrets together, which is Sarkozy.

✓ Umm, they are so friendly and we always share our secrets together, which is special.

The word 'Sarkozy' is likely a mispronunciation or incorrect word. Replacing it with 'special' makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× Actually I don't have an I don't have a fixture feature plan, but I think after my IELTS test I want to be a teacher and continue my teaching.

✓ Actually, I don't have a fixed future plan, but I think after my IELTS test I want to be a teacher and continue teaching.

The phrase 'fixture feature plan' is incorrect; it should be 'fixed future plan'. Also, 'continue my teaching' is better expressed as 'continue teaching'. Adding commas improves sentence clarity.

× But in the future I would like to do something that can make a lot of money, such as I can work for.

✓ But in the future, I would like to do something that can make a lot of money, such as working for a company.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'working for a company' completes the thought and corrects sentence structure.