Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但语法和表达上有些小错误，如“teach students improve”应为“teach students to improve”。建议注意动词不定式的使用，并简化表达，使答案更流畅。

例: I graduated over two years ago, and now I work as a tutor at an education company. My job is to help students improve their learning skills and remember vocabulary more quickly.

提案: 时态使用不当，问题是现在时，回答却用了过去时“worked”。此外，“in the central of the city”表达不准确，应为“in the center of the city”。建议注意时态一致和地理位置表达。

例: I work at an education company located in the center of the city. The environment is friendly and positive, which helps me complete my tasks efficiently.

提案: 回答中有较多口头语“umm”“uh”，影响流畅度。句子结构不完整且有语法错误，如“it can much easier”应为“it is much easier”。建议减少口头语，注意句子完整和语法正确。

例: Yes, definitely. Firstly, the environment is friendly and positive, which makes it easier to get things done. Also, the office is well located, so commuting is much easier for me.

提案: 时态混乱，使用了过去时“worked”，应为现在时。句子结构复杂且不够清晰，建议简化句子，保持时态一致，并避免重复表达。

例: Yes, definitely. I like my workplace because the atmosphere is friendly and positive, which helps me stay motivated and complete my tasks easily.

提案: 回答内容清晰且相关，但表达略显简单。建议使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，并丰富词汇表达。

例: In the future, I plan to obtain more certifications so that I can join a better company. Additionally, I want to learn new skills to help me secure a higher position within the organization.

× I have graduated for over 2 years, so now I'm working in an education company as a tutor.

✓ I have graduated for over 2 years ago, so now I'm working in an education company as a tutor.

“graduate”后面表示时间时，应该用“for”或“since”，这里应使用“for over 2 years”或“over 2 years ago”。原句中“for over 2 years”后面缺少“ago”，导致表达不准确。

× My job is to teach students improve their learning skills and how to remember the words quickly.

✓ My job is to teach students to improve their learning skills and how to remember words quickly.

动词“teach”后面接动词时，应该用不定式“to improve”，而不是直接用动词原形“improve”。此外，“the words”中“the”不必要，改为“words”更自然。

× I worked at an education company which is located in the central of the city.

✓ I worked at an education company which is located in the center of the city.

“central”是形容词，不能直接用作名词，应该用名词“center”表示“市中心”。

× The office is well located, it can much easier for me to commute.

✓ The office is well located, it is much easier for me to commute.

“can much easier”结构错误，应该用“it is much easier”来表达“更容易”。“can”不适合此处用法。

× I like the place where I worked at first is that the atmosphere is friendly and positive, which makes it easier to get things done and make me stay motivated and get complete tasks easily.

✓ I like the place where I work because the atmosphere is friendly and positive, which makes it easier to get things done and helps me stay motivated and complete tasks easily.

此句时态不一致，描述现在喜欢的地方应使用现在时“work”，而非过去时“worked”。此外，句子结构不完整，需调整连接词和动词形式使句子通顺。

× I want to get more certification to get into a better company and I want to learn more skills to help me gain a good position in the company.

✓ I want to get more certifications to get into a better company and I want to learn more skills to help me gain a good position in the company.

“certification”应使用复数形式“certifications”，表示多项证书。