Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và nói lan man.

例: I am currently working as a software tester at an IT company. I started this job about three years ago, and I am responsible for maintaining software products.

提案: Bạn nên nói rõ ràng hơn về nơi làm việc và công việc cụ thể, tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như "subway testing field" nếu không đúng. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I work at an IT company in Ho Chi Minh City, specializing in software testing. I really enjoy the challenges that come with this job.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý bằng các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, it is a good place to work because I have a supportive team. Everyone helps each other, and I can learn a lot from my colleagues.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh để diễn đạt ý muốn học hỏi và môi trường làm việc tốt.

例: Yes, I would like to work in a place that has a fun and professional atmosphere where I can learn new skills and enjoy my work without stress.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và rõ ràng hơn.

例: I started working about two years ago, and my future plan is to continue improving my skills and learn new things in the software industry, especially in software testing.

× I am work at a doctor in an IT company in university.

✓ I work as a developer in an IT company at the university.

The phrase 'I am work' is incorrect because 'work' is a verb that does not use 'am' in the present simple tense. The correct form is 'I work'. Also, 'at a doctor' is unclear and likely a misuse; 'as a developer' or the correct job title should be used. 'In university' should be 'at the university' to specify location.

× Yeah, I start the job, uh, about 3 years ago.

✓ Yeah, I started the job about 3 years ago.

When referring to an action completed in the past, the past tense 'started' should be used instead of the present tense 'start'.

× I am maintained in a, a software product and everything.

✓ I maintain a software product and everything.

The phrase 'I am maintained' is incorrect because 'maintain' is an active verb here. The correct present simple form is 'I maintain'. 'Am maintained' would be passive and incorrect in this context.

× I'm working an IT company in Ho Chi Minh City.

✓ I'm working at an IT company in Ho Chi Minh City.

The verb 'working' requires the preposition 'at' to indicate the place of work. Missing preposition causes grammatical error.

× I work in, uh, a subway testing field.

✓ I work in the subway testing field.

The article 'the' is needed before 'subway testing field' to specify the field. Also, 'in' is correct here, but the sentence needs the definite article.

× I really enjoyed the challenge up, uh.

✓ I really enjoy the challenge.

The sentence mixes past tense 'enjoyed' with present context. Also, 'challenge up' is incorrect; 'challenge' alone suffices. Present tense 'enjoy' fits better here.

× Yes, I think uh, visit my good way and just play to work because, uh, I have a nice team.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good place and I enjoy working because I have a nice team.

The original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect pronouns and phrases. 'Visit my good way' and 'play to work' are incorrect. The correction clarifies meaning and uses proper pronouns.

× They are uh, everyone support each other a lot and I can learn uh umm, from them uh, more, uh, more.

✓ Everyone supports each other a lot and I can learn more from them.

'They are uh, everyone' is redundant and incorrect. 'Everyone' is singular and requires 'supports'. The sentence is simplified for clarity.

× Yeah, I would like a place with a with a fun atmosphere and professional because India where when I I can learn a new skill and enjoy the world, avoid stress.

✓ Yeah, I would like a place with a fun and professional atmosphere where I can learn new skills, enjoy the work, and avoid stress.

The original sentence has unclear pronouns and phrases like 'India where when I I'. The correction clarifies meaning and corrects pronoun use.

× Yeah, I just start my work like 2 years ago.

✓ Yeah, I just started my work about 2 years ago.

When referring to a past event, the past tense 'started' should be used instead of 'start'.

× So umm my future plan I continue improve my uh, my skill and learn new thing about software industry, especially in a testing skill.

✓ So, my future plan is to continue improving my skills and learn new things about the software industry, especially testing skills.

The sentence lacks proper verb forms and articles. 'Continue improve' should be 'continue improving'. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills'. 'New thing' should be 'new things'. The sentence is corrected for proper tense and grammar.