Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更直接地回应问题，避免含糊不清。可以简洁明了地说明目前的状态，并减少语气词和重复。

例: I am currently between jobs because I recently resigned from my position as a specialist.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。应使用正确的时态和句子结构，并解释地名时应更自然。

例: I worked in Qian Tang District, Hangzhou, where my last company was located. The area is also known as Da Xue Cheng, which means 'University City'.

提案: 回答不连贯且语法错误较多。应使用连词使句子更流畅，并具体说明原因。

例: It's hard to say if it's a good place to work because, on one hand, Hangzhou offers many opportunities for young people.

提案: 回答应更自然流畅，避免重复和语气词。可以更具体地描述压力和身体问题。

例: I didn't like my previous workplace because it caused me a lot of stress and health issues, so I decided to resign to take a break.

提案: 回答应更清晰，避免语法错误和重复。可以更具体地表达未来计划。

例: I haven't decided exactly, but I love English and learning languages, so I might become a teacher or work in a related field.

× I was a specialist, uh, as usual, but I choose to resign from it.

✓ I was a specialist, uh, as usual, but I chose to resign from it.

这里的动作发生在过去，动词choose应使用过去式chose。

× I worked in Qian Tang District, Hangzhou, because my last company was established, uh, at there.

✓ I worked in Qian Tang District, Hangzhou, because my last company was established there.

介词at与there连用不正确，there本身表示地点，不需要加介词。

× It also be called da xue Cheng means enrich a lot of.

✓ It is also called Da Xue Cheng, which means 'enrich a lot'.

句子缺少be动词，且专有名词首字母应大写，且需要用which引导定语从句。

× Why cause Hangzhou? In one hand, he brings a lot of opportunity for Young.

✓ Because Hangzhou, on one hand, brings a lot of opportunities for young people.

句子结构混乱，缺少连词，且表达不完整，需调整语序和补充词汇。

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Did you like the place where you worked?

根据上下文，谈论过去的工作地点，时态应为过去时，代词和时态需一致。

× Why? Uh, cause 'cause last company brings me a lot of pressures and a lot of physical problems.

✓ Because my last company brought me a lot of pressure and many physical problems.

介词使用不当，且pressure通常不可数，使用单数形式。

× I just wanna take it easy, so I choose to resign.

✓ I just wanted to take it easy, so I chose to resign.

wanna是口语缩写，正式写作应使用wanted，且时态应保持一致。

× Actually, I didn't think carefully about where, but I am sure that I really love English and I really love to learn languages.

✓ Actually, I haven't thought carefully about where, but I am sure that I really love English and I really love to learn languages.

此处表达现在完成时更合适，表示到目前为止的状态。

× Uh, maybe my future job is about to be a teacher.

✓ Uh, maybe my future job will be a teacher.

表达未来计划时，使用will更合适，is about to表示即将发生，语义不符。