Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve doğal olmayan ifadeler var. "I am graduated" yerine "I graduated" veya "I have graduated" kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, "no longer student anymore" ifadesi gereksiz tekrar içeriyor. Daha doğal ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışın.

例: I graduated from the psychology department this year, so I am no longer a student.

提案: Cevabınızda yer ve iş tanımı net değil. "in the Sampson" ifadesi belirsiz ve yanlış kullanılmış. Ayrıca, daha açıklayıcı ve detaylı bilgi vermeniz gerekiyor. Cümlenizi daha açık ve doğru hale getirin.

例: I work with psychologists at a clinic called Sampson, where we provide mental health services.

提案: Cevabınız kısa ve basit. Daha fazla detay vererek cevabınızı zenginleştirebilirsiniz. Örneğin, çalışma ortamı, iş arkadaşları veya diğer avantajlardan bahsedebilirsiniz.

例: Yes, it has flexible working hours, which helps me balance my personal and professional life effectively.

提案: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları var. "This is so much comfortable environment" ifadesi yanlış. Daha doğal ve doğru ifadeler kullanmalısınız.

例: Yes, I like this place because it has a very comfortable and friendly environment.

提案: Cevabınızda anlam belirsizliği ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "wanna" yerine "want to" kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümleniz tamamlanmamış ve karışık. Gelecek planlarınızı açık ve net bir şekilde ifade edin.

例: I want to open a kindergarten by the beach in the future, providing a fun and educational environment for children.

× I am graduated in psychology department this year so I am no longer student anymore.

✓ I graduated from the psychology department this year, so I am no longer a student.

The phrase 'I am graduated' is incorrect because 'graduate' is a regular verb and should be used in the simple past tense 'graduated' to indicate a completed action. Also, 'in psychology department' should be 'from the psychology department' to correctly express the source of graduation. Additionally, 'no longer student anymore' is redundant; 'no longer a student' is sufficient.

× I am graduated in psychology department this year so I am no longer student anymore.

✓ I graduated from the psychology department this year, so I am no longer a student.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'psychology department'; the correct preposition is 'from' to indicate the institution or department from which one graduates.

× I am graduated in psychology department this year so I am no longer student anymore.

✓ I graduated from the psychology department this year, so I am no longer a student.

The word 'student' is singular and needs an article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× I work with psychologists in the Sampson.

✓ I work with psychologists at Sampson.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'the Sampson'; if 'Sampson' is a place or organization, 'at' is the correct preposition to indicate location or workplace. Also, 'the' is unnecessary unless 'Sampson' is a specific place requiring it.

× I work with psychologists in the Sampson.

✓ I work with psychologists at Sampson.

The definite article 'the' before 'Sampson' is unnecessary unless 'Sampson' is a place that requires it. Usually, company or place names do not need 'the'.

× Yes, I like this place. This is so much comfortable environment.

✓ Yes, I like this place. This is a very comfortable environment.

The phrase 'so much comfortable' is incorrect; 'very comfortable' is the correct adverb-adjective combination. Also, 'environment' is a countable noun here and needs an article 'a'.

× I wanna open kinder kindergarten in the beach in the place in.

✓ I want to open a kindergarten on the beach in that place.

The informal 'wanna' should be 'want to' in formal speech. 'Kinder kindergarten' is redundant; 'kindergarten' suffices. The preposition 'in the beach' is incorrect; 'on the beach' is correct. The phrase 'in the place in' is unclear and should be 'in that place' or omitted for clarity.