Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: In your answer, try to use complete sentences and correct prepositions. For example, say "I currently work for..." instead of "I'm currently for..." Also, avoid redundancy and make your sentences clearer by linking ideas logically.

例: I currently work for Kansas Analytical Engineers at a power utility company. My main responsibilities include testing and inspecting electrical equipment to ensure it meets utility standards before connection to the network. I enjoy this job because it helps maintain the reliability of the power supply.

提案: Make sure to use correct verb forms and plural/singular agreement, such as "provides" instead of "provide" and "improved people's lives" instead of "improved people live". Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I work in Phnom Penh City for a power utility company that mainly provides electricity and related electrical services to society across the country. I am proud to work in a team that has improved people's lives by ensuring the quality of electricity.

提案: Try to use plural forms correctly, such as "fresh graduates" and "offers" instead of "offer". Also, use linking words like "especially" and "additionally" properly to make your answer more coherent and natural.

例: Yes, definitely. I would say it is a very good place to work, especially for fresh graduates or people who want to change their jobs for a better working environment. The company offers support, a good atmosphere, and opportunities to learn new skills. Additionally, the salary is quite good, which can improve our lifestyle.

提案: Your answer is good but you can improve by using more natural expressions. For example, say "The workplace is well-organized and efficient" instead of "very recognized and efficient". Also, ensure subject-verb agreement like "helps me" instead of "help me".

例: Yes, I really enjoy working at my current job because the environment is both comfortable and friendly. The workplace is well-organized and efficient, which helps me stay productive and motivated throughout the day. Additionally, my colleagues are professional and supportive, making it a pleasant place to work.

提案: Try to use clearer sentence structures and correct grammar. For example, say "I want to switch to a higher position because it will give me more opportunities to be involved in big projects and decision-making, which helps the community." Also, avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas.

例: In the future, I would like to continue working in the same company but switch to a higher position. This will give me more opportunities to be involved in big projects and decision-making, which is very helpful for the community.

× I'm currently for Kansas Analytical Engineers at a power utility company.

✓ I'm currently working for Kansas Analytical Engineers at a power utility company.

The sentence is missing the verb 'working' after 'currently'. In English, when expressing an ongoing action, the verb in the present participle form (-ing) is required after 'currently'. So, 'I'm currently working' is correct.

× I work in Phnom Penh City for a power utility company that mainly provide electricity and related electrical service to the society across the country.

✓ I work in Phnom Penh City for a power utility company that mainly provides electricity and related electrical services to society across the country.

The subject 'company' is singular, so the verb should be 'provides' (third person singular). Also, 'service' should be plural 'services' to match 'electricity' and the context. 'The society' is incorrect; 'society' is uncountable here and does not need 'the'.

× I am proud to works in the team that has improved people live by ensure quality of electricity.

✓ I am proud to work in the team that has improved people's lives by ensuring the quality of electricity.

After 'to', the base form of the verb is used, so 'works' should be 'work'. 'People live' should be 'people's lives' to show possession and plural. 'Ensure' should be 'ensuring' to match the gerund form after 'by'. Also, 'the quality' is needed here.

× The company offer support to you, atmosphere and good opportunities to learn new skills.

✓ The company offers support to you, a good atmosphere, and good opportunities to learn new skills.

The subject 'company' is singular, so the verb should be 'offers'. Also, 'atmosphere' needs an article 'a' to be correct. The sentence structure is improved by adding commas and 'and'.

× Additionally, the salary here is quite better which can improve our living style.

✓ Additionally, the salary here is quite good, which can improve our lifestyle.

'Better' is a comparative adjective and needs a comparison object; here, 'quite good' is more appropriate. 'Living style' is better expressed as one word 'lifestyle'.

× The working place is very recognized and efficient, which help me to stay productive and motivated throughout the day.

✓ The workplace is very well organized and efficient, which helps me to stay productive and motivated throughout the day.

'Working place' should be 'workplace' as one word. 'Recognized' is not appropriate here; 'well organized' fits better. The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'which' referring to 'workplace'.

× The company offer support to you, atmosphere and good opportunities to learn new skills.

✓ The company offers support to you, a good atmosphere, and good opportunities to learn new skills.

The subject 'company' is singular, so the verb should be 'offers' (third person singular). Also, 'atmosphere' needs an article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× Well, in the future I would like to work in the same company but I want to switch the position the higher the better.

✓ Well, in the future I would like to work in the same company, but I want to switch positions—the higher, the better.

'Switch the position' is incorrect; it should be 'switch positions' (plural) to indicate changing roles. Also, the phrase 'the higher the better' needs commas and a dash for clarity.

× I want to change the position because under higher position give me more opportunity to involve in some big project and decision making which is very helpful for the community.

✓ I want to change the position because a higher position gives me more opportunities to be involved in some big projects and decision-making, which is very helpful for the community.

'Under higher position' is incorrect; it should be 'a higher position'. The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject. 'Opportunity' should be plural 'opportunities'. 'Involve' should be 'to be involved' to form the passive infinitive. 'Project' should be plural 'projects'. 'Decision making' should be hyphenated as 'decision-making'.