Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating 'work' and try to combine ideas smoothly. Also, use articles correctly, for example, 'an economics teacher'.

例: I work as an economics teacher at a central government school in India, and I really enjoy my job.

提案: Good content and structure, but improve grammar and linking. For example, use 'because it is rewarding to see my students achieve their potential and do well in life.' Also, try to link sentences for better flow.

例: I work as an economics teacher at a school, teaching high school and intermediate students. I like my profession very much because it is rewarding to see my students achieve their potential and do well in life.

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, 'because the administration is supportive and willing to resolve staff issues, and my colleagues are cooperative, which creates a positive environment.'

例: Yes, it is a good place to work because the administration is supportive and willing to resolve any issues faced by staff. Moreover, my colleagues are cooperative, which creates a positive and encouraging environment.

提案: Good answer but improve grammar and use linking words. For example, say 'because it is a small city free from the hassle of large cities, and the people there are very friendly and cooperative.'

例: Yes, I like the place where I work because it is a small city free from the hassle of large cities, and the people there are very friendly and cooperative.

提案: Very good answer with clear structure and content. To improve further, you can use more varied vocabulary and link ideas more naturally. For example, use 'thereby enabling me to support my students more effectively.'

例: In the future, I plan to enhance my teaching skills by enrolling in professional development courses, thereby enabling me to support my students more effectively and help them achieve better academic progress.

× Currently I'm working in a central government school as economics teacher back in India.

✓ Currently I'm working in a central government school as an economics teacher back in India.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'an' before the singular noun 'economics teacher'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article or determiner. Adding 'an' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I like my profession very much because it's very rewarding when I see my students achieve their potential and doing well in their life.

✓ I like my profession very much because it's very rewarding when I see my students achieve their potential and do well in their life.

After the conjunction 'and', the verb should be in the base form 'do' to parallel 'achieve'. Using 'doing' is incorrect here because it breaks the parallel structure of the verbs following 'see'.

× the administration is very supportive and always willing to, uh, resolve the issues, uh, whatever faced by their staff.

✓ the administration is very supportive and always willing to, uh, resolve the issues, uh, whatever are faced by their staff.

The phrase 'whatever faced by their staff' is missing the auxiliary verb 'are' to form the passive voice correctly. The correct form is 'whatever are faced by their staff' to indicate the issues that staff face.

× The people of that area is very friendly and cooperative.

✓ The people of that area are very friendly and cooperative.

'People' is a plural noun and requires the plural verb 'are' instead of the singular 'is'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.