Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答简洁明了，但可以稍微丰富一点，增加一些细节，使回答更自然和有效。例如，可以说明你在学习什么专业或在哪个学校学习。

例: I am a student currently studying computer science at Chulalongkorn University.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，且信息不够清晰。建议直接回答自己是学生，并说明学习地点，同时避免重复和语法错误。

例: I don't work; I am studying in Bangkok, which is a very crowded city.

提案: 回答中有语法和用词错误，如'unwary'应为'unwary'。建议使用更准确的词汇，并且结构更清晰，避免冗长。

例: Yes, I think Bangkok is a good place to work because it is an international city with many job opportunities.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议直接表达观点，并用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

例: Not really. I don't like the place where I study because it is more like the countryside, but I prefer living in the city.

提案: 回答表达了未来计划，但句子结构不够自然，且有重复。建议简洁明了地表达，并用连词连接。

例: My future plan is to become an international teacher, for example, teaching Chinese abroad in different countries.

× I'm not work but I'm studying in Bangkok and I think Bangkok is a very crowded city.

✓ I don't work but I'm studying in Bangkok and I think Bangkok is a very crowded city.

The phrase 'I'm not work' is incorrect because 'work' is a verb and cannot be used directly after 'I'm' (I am). The correct form is 'I don't work' to express the negative present tense. 'I'm' is used with verbs ending in -ing to form the present continuous tense, but here the verb 'work' is in simple present tense.

× Bangkok is an unwary international city and so that you can have more opportunity for your job.

✓ Bangkok is a very international city so that you can have more opportunities for your job.

The word 'unwary' is incorrect in this context; it means 'not cautious' and does not describe a city. The intended meaning is likely 'busy' or 'international'. Also, 'more opportunity' should be plural 'more opportunities' because 'more' refers to countable plural nouns here. The phrase 'and so that' is redundant; 'so that' alone is sufficient.

× Not really. I don't like the place what I'm studying in because I think it's not an urban places like the countryside place, but I like the city.

✓ Not really. I don't like the place where I'm studying because I think it's not an urban place like the countryside, but I like the city.

The relative pronoun 'what' is incorrect here; 'where' should be used to refer to a place. Also, 'places' should be singular 'place' to agree with 'the place'. The phrase 'countryside place' is better as just 'the countryside'.

× My future work plan is I want to be an international teacher.

✓ My future work plan is to be an international teacher.

The sentence structure is awkward. 'My future work plan is I want to be...' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'My future work plan is to be...' using the infinitive form to express purpose or plan.

× For example, I want to teach Chinese to international places like Teach Chinese abroad.

✓ For example, I want to teach Chinese in international places, like teaching Chinese abroad.

The phrase 'teach Chinese to international places' is incorrect because 'places' cannot receive teaching. The correct preposition is 'in' for locations. Also, 'like Teach Chinese abroad' is ungrammatical; it should be 'like teaching Chinese abroad' to maintain parallel structure and correct verb form.