Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 文法の誤りを直し、より自然で明確な表現を使いましょう。例えば、"I am a university student studying politics. My university is located in Tokyo, where there are many government buildings, so I can learn a lot about politics."のように言えます。

例: I am a university student studying politics. My university is located in Tokyo, where there are many government buildings, so I can learn a lot about politics.

提案: 文の構造を整理し、理由を明確に述べましょう。例えば、"I am a student, but I have a part-time job at a cafe in Yokohama. At first, I didn't like coffee, but now I enjoy it because I started working there."のように表現できます。

例: I am a student, but I have a part-time job at a cafe in Yokohama. At first, I didn't like coffee, but now I enjoy it because I started working there.

提案: 単語の誤りを直し、文を簡潔にしましょう。例えば、"Yes, it is a good place to work because the cafe is near Yokohama station, and I live near Okurayama station, so it's easy for me to get there."のように言えます。

例: Yes, it is a good place to work because the cafe is near Yokohama station, and I live near Okurayama station, so it's easy for me to get there.

提案: 意味が伝わりにくいので、理由を明確にし、文法を正しましょう。例えば、"Yes, I like the place where I work because it is close to where I live near Okurayama station. I don't like taking the train, so working nearby is convenient for me."のように表現できます。

例: Yes, I like the place where I work because it is close to where I live near Okurayama station. I don't like taking the train, so working nearby is convenient for me.

提案: 文法と意味を明確にし、将来の計画について具体的に話しましょう。例えば、"I'm not sure about my future work plans because I am still a university student. However, I want to find a job that I enjoy and that suits me."のように言えます。

例: I'm not sure about my future work plans because I am still a university student. However, I want to find a job that I enjoy and that suits me.

× I'm a university student and I learning about politics.

✓ I'm a university student and I am learning about politics.

The verb 'learning' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. The correct form is 'I am learning'.

× My university locating at Tokyo and there is many body rules buildings so I can learn about many things.

✓ My university is located in Tokyo and there are many government buildings so I can learn about many things.

The verb 'locating' should be in the passive form 'is located' to describe the university's location. Also, 'there is' should be 'there are' because 'many buildings' is plural. 'Body rules buildings' is unclear; 'government buildings' is a better phrase.

× Actually, I didn't like coffee, but now I like coffee because when I started.

✓ Actually, I didn't like coffee, but now I like it because when I started working there, I got used to it.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'working there' clarifies the context. Also, 'like coffee' should be followed by 'it' to refer to coffee. The modal verb 'can' or 'could' is not directly involved here, but the sentence needs completion for clarity.

× Yes, because the copy is located nearby the Yokohama station and I'm leaving near the Oklahoma station so it is easy for go to the cafe for me.

✓ Yes, because the cafe is located near Yokohama station and I live near Okurayama station, so it is easy for me to go to the cafe.

'Copy' is a typo; it should be 'cafe'. 'Nearby' is an adverb; 'near' is the correct preposition here. 'I'm leaving' should be 'I live'. 'Oklahoma' is likely a mishearing of 'Okurayama'. 'Easy for go' should be 'easy for me to go'.

× I would like the place. I work in Yokohama because I'm living nearby the Oklahoma station so I hate the train so I like the place in.

✓ I like the place. I work in Yokohama because I live near Okurayama station. I hate taking the train, so I like working there.

'I would like the place' is incorrect; 'I like the place' fits better. 'I'm living' should be 'I live'. 'Oklahoma' is likely 'Okurayama'. 'I like the place in' is incomplete; 'working there' clarifies the meaning. 'Hate the train' should be 'hate taking the train'.

× I'm not sure because I'm university student and I don't think about my future work, but I want to work for my want to do me.

✓ I'm not sure because I'm a university student and I haven't thought about my future work, but I want to do what I want.

'I'm university student' needs an article 'a'. 'I don't think about' should be 'I haven't thought about' to express the current state. The phrase 'I want to work for my want to do me' is unclear; 'I want to do what I want' is clearer.