Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用正确的语法表达职业。

例: I am currently working as a business analyst at a pharmaceutical company.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的动词形式，并清楚描述工作内容。

例: I work at a pharmaceutical company in the city center. My job involves collecting requests from scientists and training them to use real websites.

提案: 回答较好，表达清晰且内容具体。但“walk to work”用法不当，应改为“workplace is good”或类似表达。

例: Yes, I think it is a good place to work because the environment is friendly and supportive, which helps employees stay motivated. Additionally, the company offers good benefits and opportunities for personal growth.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用正确的词汇。

例: To be honest, I don't like my workplace because it is an open-plan office where many colleagues often have video calls, which can be noisy. This noise sometimes distracts me and makes it hard to concentrate.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，表达不够准确。建议使用正确的短语和词汇，清晰表达计划。

例: In the future, I plan to pursue a career in digital marketing because it combines creativity with data analysis, which I find very appealing. I want to gain more experience through internships and online courses to develop my skills further.

× I'm currently working for a pharmaceutical company. In my occupation is a business analysis.

✓ I'm currently working for a pharmaceutical company. My occupation is business analysis.

原句中“In my occupation is a business analysis”结构不正确，缺少主语和谓语的合理搭配。应改为“My occupation is business analysis”，使句子结构完整，表达清晰。

× My job involves collect the request from library scientists and trains them to a real websites.

✓ My job involves collecting requests from library scientists and training them to real websites.

动词involve后应接动名词形式，故collect应改为collecting。同时，requests应为复数形式，trains应改为training，websites前不应加冠词a。

× Yes, I believe it is a good place to walk to work because the environment is friendly and supporting, which helps employees stay motivated.

✓ Yes, I believe it is a good place to walk to work because the environment is friendly and supportive, which helps employees stay motivated.

形容词supporting用错，应使用形容词supportive表示“支持的，有帮助的”。

× To be honest, I don't really like my workplace because it's a it's a open plate office where many colleges often hold video calls which may seem noisy.

✓ To be honest, I don't really like my workplace because it's an open-plan office where many colleagues often hold video calls which may seem noisy.

冠词使用错误，open前应使用an而非a；plate应为plan；colleges应为colleagues，意为同事。

× This noise sometimes distress me and make it difficult to concentrate on my tasks.

✓ This noise sometimes distresses me and makes it difficult to concentrate on my tasks.

主语为单数名词noise，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式distresses和makes。

× I am to get more experience through internships and online clothes to development skills further.

✓ I plan to get more experience through internships and online courses to develop my skills further.

原句中“am to get”用法不当，应使用plan to表达计划；clothes应为courses；development应为动词develop；my skills前应加物主代词my。