Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit long and slightly unclear in parts. Try to make your response more concise and directly answer the question first, then add specific supporting details. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

例: I'm currently a student at Azad University, majoring in computer engineering. I hope to become an AI engineer specializing in a niche area, which I believe will be life-changing for me.

提案: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly, using linking words to explain reasons. Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence flow.

例: I used to work at an English learning institute, but I quit because their strict policies and the time-consuming lesson planning made it difficult for me to continue.

提案: Your answer has some repetition and grammatical mistakes. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details. Also, correct subject-verb agreement and avoid filler words.

例: The workplace has a friendly atmosphere where you can meet new coworkers. However, dealing with students can be challenging at times, and it takes some time to adjust.

提案: Your answer includes many fillers and is somewhat unclear. Try to be more direct and concise, avoiding unnecessary hesitation. Provide clear opinions supported by reasons or examples.

例: I'm not currently working, but my previous job was acceptable. I didn't spend much time there outside of teaching classes because I preferred to focus on my studies.

提案: Your answer is repetitive and contains some hesitation. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect them. Also, avoid repeating words and improve pronunciation of acronyms.

例: I plan to complete my studies and deepen my knowledge in AI. Ultimately, I want to specialize in a niche area and become an AI researcher or engineer.

× I'm currently a student at Azad University, I'm majoring in computer engineering and I'm looking forward into become an UH AI engineer and I would like to specialize in a niche area and I think if it's going to be a life changing thing.

✓ I'm currently a student at Azad University, I'm majoring in computer engineering and I'm looking forward to becoming an UH AI engineer. I would like to specialize in a niche area and I think it is going to be a life-changing thing.

The phrase 'looking forward into become' is incorrect. The correct form is 'looking forward to' followed by a gerund (verb + -ing), so 'looking forward to becoming' is correct. Also, 'life changing' should be hyphenated as 'life-changing' when used as an adjective before a noun.

× I used to work at a English learning institute but I came to a disagreement with the institute because I because of their strict policies and writing lesson plans for them was just too time consuming so I had to quit and it was unrelated.

✓ I used to work at an English learning institute but I came to a disagreement with the institute because of their strict policies, and writing lesson plans for them was just too time-consuming, so I had to quit and it was unrelated.

The article 'a' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'English' should be 'an'. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. The sentence also had a repeated phrase 'because I because of' which was corrected to 'because of'.

× But dealing with the students is sometimes so baffling and you takes time to get used to that.

✓ But dealing with the students is sometimes so baffling and it takes time to get used to that.

The subject 'it' (referring to the situation) requires the verb 'takes' in third person singular. 'You takes' is incorrect because 'you' pairs with 'take' (without 's'). Here, 'it takes' is appropriate.

× I didn't, I didn't used to stay there for a long time.

✓ I didn't, I didn't use to stay there for a long time.

After 'didn't', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'use' instead of 'used'. 'Didn't used to' is incorrect; the correct form is 'didn't use to'.