Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较简洁，但可以稍微扩展，增加细节，使回答更自然流畅。比如说明直播内容或工作时间。

例: I'm currently working as a live streamer on TikTok, where I mainly share gaming content during evenings to engage with my audience.

提案: 回答内容完整，但句子结构稍显重复，可以使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I mostly work at home because as a live streamer on TikTok, my workplace is very flexible; I just need my phone, so I can work anywhere I want.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达上的小错误，建议注意句子结构和用词准确性，避免重复表达。

例: It's a good place to work because I feel relaxed and comfortable at home. Moreover, I don't have to commute, which makes it more convenient and helps me focus better.

提案: 时态使用不当，且句子结构重复，建议注意时态一致性并丰富表达。

例: Yes, definitely. Since I work from home, I always feel relaxed and comfortable, and it saves me a lot of energy because I don't have to spend time commuting.

提案: 表达中有语法错误和词汇使用不当，建议加强语法准确性和词汇选择。

例: Regarding my future work plans, I have always wanted to become a translator, so I am currently studying and taking on related tasks to become an interpreter.

× Mostly I work at home because I'm a live streamer on TikTok so my working place is really flexible.

✓ Mostly I work from home because I'm a live streamer on TikTok so my working place is really flexible.

这里应该使用介词“from”表示“在家工作”，而不是“at”。“work from home”是固定搭配，表示远程工作。

× In my home I always feel relaxing and comfortable and I know I don't need to be a commuter, so it's much more convenient and it can also boost my working.

✓ In my home I always feel relaxed and comfortable and I know I don't need to be a commuter, so it's much more convenient and it can also boost my work.

“feel relaxing”错误，应该用“feel relaxed”表示感到放松。“boost my working”表达不自然，应该用“boost my work”表示提升工作效率。

× Since I worked at my home I always feel relaxing and comfortable and it saves me a lot of energy since I don't need to spend time on commuting.

✓ Since I work at my home I always feel relaxed and comfortable and it saves me a lot of energy since I don't need to spend time commuting.

“Since”引导的时间状语从句应使用现在完成时或现在时，不能用过去时“worked”。“feel relaxing”应改为“feel relaxed”。“spend time on commuting”中“on”多余，应直接用“spend time commuting”。

× I always want to be a translator, so I'm currently studying and taking tasks trying to be a interpreter.

✓ I always want to be a translator, so I'm currently studying and taking tasks trying to be an interpreter.

“a interpreter”前应使用“an”，因为“interpreter”以元音音素开头，冠词使用错误。