Work— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you work or are you a student?
受験者
Oh, I work, I work for a company called Equity and they're based in Atlanta, but yeah, they allow, umm, employees to work from home and my schedule is pretty flexible, so I enjoy working, uh, for my company.
試験官
Where do you work?>
受験者
It's a company called Acuity, and yeah, they have their main office in Atlanta, but I work from home because they let most of the IT team to work from home and so far I've been enjoying working for the company.
試験官
Is it a good place to work?
受験者
Yes, I'd say it's an excellent place for work, especially for people who graduated recently, because they provide a very supportive environment for young people. Uh, we are allowed to choose what team we want to go to and even rotate across them.
試験官
Would you like the place where you work?
受験者
Yeah, I like the place and I'd highly recommend my friends to come work here. It's because I think everyone that I've spoken to in my company is very supportive and they have a very good culture where they nourish employees and like, let them develop their skills.
試験官
What are your future work plans?
受験者
I think I'd like to stay in my current software engineering track but I would like to gain more specialized knowledge. Umm 2 topics that I can think of are back end engineering and artificial intelligence because I know those are essential skills that might be crucial in future.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
スコア: 75.0提案: Try to avoid repetition and filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Also, be more concise and clear by directly answering the question first, then adding relevant details. For example, mention your job and company once, then explain the flexible schedule and work-from-home policy.
例: I work for a company called Equity based in Atlanta. They allow employees to work from home, and my schedule is quite flexible, which I really enjoy.
Where do you work?
スコア: 80.0提案: Avoid repeating information already mentioned and try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes such as 'let most of the IT team to work' should be 'let most of the IT team work'.
例: I work for Acuity, a company with its main office in Atlanta. Since they allow most of the IT team to work from home, I do so and have been enjoying it so far.
Is it a good place to work?
スコア: 85.0提案: Good answer with relevant details. To improve, avoid filler words like 'Uh' and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to be more specific about what makes the environment supportive.
例: Yes, it's an excellent place to work, especially for recent graduates, because they provide a supportive environment by offering mentorship and allowing employees to choose and rotate between teams.
Would you like the place where you work?
スコア: 80.0提案: Try to avoid informal language like 'Yeah' and filler words like 'like'. Use more precise vocabulary such as 'encourage' instead of 'let'. Also, structure your answer with linking words for clarity.
例: Yes, I like the place and would highly recommend it to my friends because everyone is very supportive, and the company culture encourages employees to develop their skills.
What are your future work plans?
スコア: 85.0提案: Good content and structure. To improve, avoid filler words like 'Umm' and be more confident in your statements. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
例: I plan to continue in my software engineering career but aim to gain specialized knowledge in back-end engineering and artificial intelligence, as these skills will be crucial in the future.
文法
× they let most of the IT team to work from home
✓ they let most of the IT team work from home
The verb 'let' is followed directly by the base form of the verb without 'to'. Using 'to' after 'let' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'let someone do something'. Therefore, 'let most of the IT team work' is correct.
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