Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clear and grammatically correct. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details (how long, role). Avoid sentence fragments and repetitive phrasing.

例: I work as a supervisor at a construction company. I have been in this role for about two years since I finished my studies.

提案: Answer directly with the company name and remove irrelevant phrases. Use one supporting detail such as the city or the company type. Keep it natural and concise.

例: I work for Raj Builders Private Limited, a private construction firm based in Kathmandu.

提案: Give a clear reason or two for why you like it. Use linking words (because, and) and correct capitalization. Avoid unclear time references unless relevant.

例: Yes, it's a good place to work because my colleagues are friendly and communication is open. Also, the working hours are reasonable, which helps maintain a good work–life balance.

提案: Respond with a clear opinion and specific reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas and finish sentences fully. Mention proximity and supportive coworkers succinctly.

例: Yes, I really like my workplace because it's close to my home, so my commute is short, and my co‑workers are supportive and easy to communicate with.

提案: Provide a focused, grammatically correct plan. Use precise vocabulary (large construction firm, major infrastructure projects) and explain why you want that move with one supporting reason.

例: In the future I hope to join a large construction company such as Kalika Construction to work on major infrastructure projects like highways, because I want to gain experience on large‑scale developments.

× In the job for around 2 years after my completion.

✓ I have been in the job for around 2 years since my graduation.

The original sentence uses an incorrect past construction and missing auxiliary. Use present perfect 'have been' to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Also replace 'after my completion' with 'since my graduation' for clarity and natural collocation.

× I work with Raj Builders Private Limited which is a question.

✓ I work with Raj Builders Private Limited, which is a construction company.

'Which is a question' is incorrect contextually and grammatically. Use a relative clause to provide the correct description 'which is a construction company.' Also add a comma before the non-restrictive clause.

× Yes, I love to work in the company as the.

✓ Yes, I love working at the company.

The fragment 'as the' is incomplete and 'in the company' is less natural than 'at the company.' Use the gerund 'working' after 'love' to form a correct verb phrase and remove the unnecessary article.

× In the company right at 10 AM and also the Staffs are very communicative.

✓ At the company, I start work at 10 AM, and the staff are very communicative.

Original lacks subject and verb for the first clause and uses incorrect capitalization/pluralization 'Staffs.' Add subject 'I' and verb 'start work at' to complete the sentence. Use 'staff' as an uncountable collective noun, not 'Staffs.' Also add a comma and conjunction to join clauses.

× Yes, I love the place where I work as the as my workplace is very near to me.

✓ Yes, I love the place where I work because my workplace is very near to me.

The phrase 'as the as' is ungrammatical and repetitive. Use a conjunction 'because' to show reason. This creates a clear main clause and subordinate clause.

× So Co workers are very communicative and they.

✓ My co-workers are very communicative and helpful.

The original sentence is incomplete ending with 'they.' Add a predicate like 'are very communicative and helpful' to complete the thought. Use hyphenated 'co-workers' and lowercase unless at sentence start.

× So I would like to work for a big ocean company here in Nepal like Kalika Construction.

✓ I would like to work for a large construction company in Nepal, such as Kalika Construction.

'Big ocean company' is unclear and likely incorrect word choice. Replace with 'large construction company' and use 'such as' to give an example. Keep the conditional 'would like' which is appropriate for expressing future preference.

× Bigfoot projects like Asian highway.

✓ I hope to work on big projects, like the Asian Highway.

The fragment lacks a verb and subject. 'Bigfoot' is incorrect; use 'big projects.' Add 'I hope to work on' to complete the sentence and capitalize 'Asian Highway' as a proper noun.