Hometown— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer gives relevant information but has grammar, pronoun and clarity issues, and is a bit long. Keep it shorter (max 3–4 simple sentences), correct pronouns, and use clearer linking. For example, say where it is, one notable fact, and one brief personal comment.

例: I am from Dineshpur, in the northern part of Bangladesh. It is known for its historical sites and quiet streets. I had a comfortable childhood there and I visit often when I can.

提案: Good content about community and facilities but some word choices and sentence structure are awkward (e.g., 'introvert', 'quite too many'). Use precise adjectives and connect ideas with linking words. Limit to 2–3 sentences with examples of facilities.

例: I like the strong sense of community in Dineshpur; neighbors are friendly and respectful. Also, although the town is small, it has useful facilities such as clean roads, good schools and a small market nearby.

提案: The answer is unclear and contains grammar errors and unfinished phrases. Give a clear time frame and a concise explanation of where you live now. Use past simple and present simple correctly and avoid repetition.

例: I lived in Dineshpur for most of my childhood. After I finished my HSC (or ACC), I moved to Dhaka to continue my studies, and I am currently living there.

提案: The response addresses the question and lists reasons but has hesitation, repetition and small grammar issues. Remove fillers (uh, umm), be more specific about the kinds of institutes and activities, and use linking words to organise points (e.g., 'Firstly', 'Secondly'). Keep within 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, Dineshpur is a good place for young people. Firstly, it has several good schools and coaching centres that prepare students for higher studies. Secondly, there are affordable extracurricular activities like sports clubs and computer classes that help develop practical skills.

× Basically I am from Dineshpur which is located in the northern part of Bangladesh and it is well known for his historical place and it is quite comfortable place for my childhood.

✓ Basically I am from Dineshpur, which is located in the northern part of Bangladesh. It is well known for its historical places and it was a comfortable place for my childhood.

The sentence uses the wrong possessive pronoun 'his' for a town; use 'its' for nonhuman nouns. Also 'place' should be plural 'places' if referring to multiple historical sites. The clause about childhood should use past tense 'was' because childhood is in the past. Suggestions: use 'its' for towns, pluralize when referring to multiple sites, and match tense to time reference. (English (Bangladesh))

× I love the community in my hometown, my neighbors are so good and people in Dineshpur are polite and introvert.

✓ I love the community in my hometown; my neighbors are very kind, and people in Dineshpur tend to be reserved.

'So good' is informal and unprecise; 'very kind' or 'friendly' is better. 'Introvert' is a noun; use adjective 'introverted' or the phrase 'tend to be reserved'. Use correct punctuation to connect clauses. Suggestions: use appropriate adjective forms ('introverted' or 'reserved') and stronger descriptors ('very kind'). (English (Bangladesh))

× And the city is not big but it has quite too many facilities like the road are super clean and.

✓ The city is not big, but it has quite a few facilities, and the roads are very clean.

'Quite too many' is incorrect; use 'quite a few' or 'too many' depending on meaning. 'Road' should be plural 'roads' to agree with verb 'are'. 'Super clean' is informal; 'very clean' is preferable. Suggestions: choose correct quantifier and match noun number with verb (roads are). (English (Bangladesh))

× I lived there al almost my full childhood and then after complete my ACC exam I decided to move on DACA for my study purpose and now live I live in.

✓ I lived there for almost my entire childhood. After I completed my ACC exam, I decided to move to DACA for my studies, and now I live there.

Use 'for' with periods of time ('for almost my entire childhood'). 'Complete' should be past tense 'completed'. Preposition 'to' is used with 'move to' a place. 'Study purpose' is better as 'for my studies'. The final phrase had word order errors; 'now I live there' is correct. Suggestions: use past tense for completed actions, correct prepositions ('move to'), and natural phrases ('for my studies'). (English (Bangladesh))

× Definitely, I would like to say my hometown offers many advantages for young people. Uh, first of all, there are good educational, uh, institute and affordable umm activities now, which help students develop, develop their skill and prepare for higher studies.

✓ Definitely. I would say my hometown offers many advantages for young people. First of all, there are good educational institutes and affordable activities that help students develop their skills and prepare for higher studies.

'Educational, uh, institute' should be plural 'educational institutes'. Remove filler words and use 'that' instead of 'which' for essential clauses. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills' when speaking generally. Also 'affordable activities now' is awkward; place 'affordable' before 'activities' and omit 'now' unless necessary. Suggestions: pluralize nouns when generalizing ('institutes', 'skills'), avoid filler words, and use 'that' for defining clauses. (English (Bangladesh))