Puzzles— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“the concentration”应为“concentration”，并且表达应更自然流畅。可以增加连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复表达“kill time”。

例: Yes, I did puzzles during my childhood because my mom believed they could improve my intelligence and concentration. Moreover, puzzles were a great way to keep myself entertained when I felt bored.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“helps”应为“help”，“do not make me feel bored”表达不自然。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并避免重复表达“bored”。

例: I usually do puzzles during trips or whenever I feel bored. For example, I often play puzzles on public transportation such as planes, buses, or subways, which helps me pass the time and stay focused while feeling entertained.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“which is easier for me to complete them”应简化为“which are easier for me”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并用连接词连接句子。

例: I prefer number puzzles because I'm more familiar with numbers, so they are easier for me to solve. On the other hand, word puzzles are more challenging and difficult for me to handle.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“helps”应为“help”，“kill times”应为“kill time”。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并用更准确的词汇表达观点。

例: I believe puzzles are beneficial for older people because they can improve concentration and intelligence. Additionally, puzzles help them pass the time when they feel bored and can enhance their responsiveness.

× I usually play puzzles on the public transportation like plane, bus or the subway which will helps me to kill time and do not make me feel bored.

✓ I usually play puzzles on public transportation like planes, buses, or the subway which help me to kill time and do not make me feel bored.

这里“helps”应改为“help”，因为主语是复数（planes, buses, subway），动词应与复数主语一致。

× Also it will make me concentrate on and feel a sense of entertained.

✓ Also it will make me concentrate and feel a sense of entertainment.

“concentrate on”后面缺少宾语，且“a sense of entertained”应为“a sense of entertainment”，因为“entertained”是形容词，名词形式应使用“entertainment”。

× I prefer to play number puzzles as I'm more familiar with numbers, which is easier for me to complete them.

✓ I prefer to play number puzzles as I'm more familiar with numbers, which are easier for me to complete.

“which”指代复数“numbers”，动词应使用复数形式“are”。

× However, the word puzzle is hard, is challenging for me, and I cannot handle them well.

✓ However, word puzzles are hard, are challenging for me, and I cannot handle them well.

“word puzzle”应使用复数形式“word puzzles”，因为后文用“them”指代复数，动词也应相应改为复数形式“are”。

× Also it can helps them to kill times when they feel bored.

✓ Also it can help them to kill time when they feel bored.

情态动词“can”后应接动词原形“help”，而不是“helps”。“kill times”应为“kill time”，time不可数。